Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise, use correct grammar and avoid hesitations/repetitions. Start with a clear topic sentence, then briefly explain why with one or two specific reasons. Use linking words (because, so) and correct collocations (save time, more convenient).

예시: I prefer typing to handwriting because it’s more convenient and helps me save time. For example, I can edit and search text quickly on a computer, so I work more efficiently.

제안: Give a direct answer then add a specific reason with fewer hesitations and no repetition. Use a topic sentence followed by a supporting detail introduced by because or so. Replace vague words with precise ones (e.g., reports, documents).

예시: Yes, I type every day because my job requires me to prepare reports and documents. As a result, I use either a desktop or a laptop keyboard for several hours daily.

제안: Provide a clear time reference and avoid contradictory or confusing phrases. Begin with a direct time statement, then give a brief context or example. Use correct tense and smoother phrasing (e.g., "about 20 years ago").

예시: I learned to type about 20 years ago when computers became common. Before that, we used to write things by hand, so learning to type made work much faster.

제안: Explain your method clearly and concisely. Start with a topic sentence describing the technique (touch typing, practicing regularly), then give a specific example of how you practice and a result. Avoid word-for-word repetition and use correct expressions (both hands, touch typing, practice regularly).

예시: I improve my typing by practicing touch typing, which means using all my fingers and both hands on the keyboard. For example, I use online typing exercises for 15 minutes a day, and this has helped me increase my speed and reduce errors.

× I prefer typing because I think typing is more. Clear and can save save times better, uh.

✓ I prefer typing because I think it is clearer and saves time better.

The original has adjective/adverb errors and redundancy: 'more. Clear' is incorrect word order and punctuation; 'typing is clearer' uses comparative adjective correctly. 'save save times better' has repetition and wrong noun form 'times'; use singular 'time' and verb 'saves' for subject-verb agreement. Suggestion: remove filler words, combine clauses, and use correct comparative adjective and verb form.

× Yes I do umm, because my job is umm, report report. So I need to type on a desktop or laptop, uh, keyboard every day.

✓ Yes, I do, because my job involves reporting. So I need to type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day.

The phrase 'my job is report report' is ungrammatical and uses a noun instead of a verb phrase. Use 'involves reporting' or 'is reporting' to express ongoing job duties. Also remove extra commas and fillers. 'Keyboard every day' is fine. Suggestion: use a verb form to describe job duties and keep subject-verb agreement.

× When computer is become popular, uh, because I, I guess 20 years ago, umm, we write down, uh, we uh, handwrite. Umm, we, we write articles by handwrite.

✓ When computers became popular, about 20 years ago, we used to write things by hand; we handwrote articles.

Multiple tense and form errors: 'When computer is become popular' mixes present and passive incorrectly; use simple past 'became' and plural 'computers'. 'We write down' should be past habit 'used to write' or 'handwrote'. 'By handwrite' is wrong word form; use verb 'handwrote' or noun phrase 'by hand'. Suggestion: use consistent past tense to describe past habits and correct verb forms.

× My ways My ways let my let all my fingers on the job type job. On the type job both of my hand share the keyboard. So let this let my type very quickly.

✓ My method is to keep all my fingers on the keyboard while typing. I use both hands to share the keys, which lets me type very quickly.

Pronoun and noun usage is unclear and repetitive. 'My ways My ways let my let' is redundant. Use clear subject 'my method' and pronouns like 'my' correctly. 'Both of my hand' should be 'both of my hands' (plural). 'So let this let my type' is ungrammatical; use 'which lets me type' to show result. Suggestion: simplify, remove repetition, correct plural for 'hands', and use appropriate pronouns 'me' as object.