Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer more concise, avoid repetition and incorrect phrases, and add one specific reason with a linking word. Use clearer sentence structure and correct small grammar issues (e.g., remove duplicate words, use 'because' or 'so').

예시: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is more convenient and faster. For example, spell-check and autocorrect help me avoid mistakes, so I can complete tasks more quickly than when I write by hand.

제안: Start with a direct topic sentence, then give a clear reason and one brief supporting detail. Avoid long clauses and vague words like 'obviously'. Use linking words such as 'because' or 'however'.

예시: I don't usually type every day because most of my assignments must be handwritten. However, when I have the opportunity, I prefer to type on a laptop since it is portable and more comfortable than a desktop.

제안: Give a concise time reference and one specific detail about how you learned. Use correct prepositions and smooth linking (e.g., 'when I was a child' and 'because' or 'as').

예시: I learned to type when I was a child because my older sister used a laptop and showed me how to type while we worked on assignments together.

제안: Provide a direct answer and offer specific ways you improve, even if informal. Remove hesitations and repetitions, and use linking words like 'lately' or 'recently' to clarify timing.

예시: I haven't followed a formal method, but recently I've improved by practicing regularly and using online typing exercises. As a result, my speed and accuracy have increased.

× I would prefer typing over handwriting all all the time as it makes as it is very convenient and it helps you with your spellings and auto correction and also you can save some time while typing as handwriting takes a lot of time.

✓ I would prefer typing over handwriting all the time, because it is very convenient: it helps with spelling through autocorrect, and you can save time since handwriting takes longer.

This sentence contains repetition ('all all the time', 'as it makes as it is') and poor sentence structure. The repeated words are redundant and confuse meaning. The phrase 'helps you with your spellings and auto correction' is awkward; use 'helps with spelling through autocorrect.' Also combine related ideas with punctuation or conjunctions to improve clarity. Suggestion: remove duplicate words, choose clear noun phrases, and connect clauses logically.

× I don't often type on a laptop or desktop keyboard every day as my assignment is to be written in handwriting, so if I get a chance then I will obviously prefer to type in a laptop.

✓ I don't often type on a laptop or desktop keyboard because my assignments must be handwritten, so if I get a chance I would prefer to type on a laptop.

Mixed and inconsistent tense/modal usage: 'don't often type... every day' and 'is to be written' sound awkward. Use present simple for habitual facts ('I don't often type') and a modal for preference in a hypothetical chance ('I would prefer'). Also 'in a laptop' is incorrect preposition; use 'on a laptop.' Replace 'as' with 'because' for clarity and make 'assignments' plural and 'must be handwritten' clearer.

× I learned how to type in a keyboard during my childhood days as my sister would use laptop and she taught me how to type along with her assignments.

✓ I learned how to type on a keyboard during my childhood because my sister used a laptop and taught me to type while doing her assignments.

Incorrect preposition 'in a keyboard' should be 'on a keyboard.' 'Would use laptop' is awkward; use simple past 'used a laptop.' 'Along with her assignments' is unclear; 'while doing her assignments' expresses that you learned while she worked. Use 'to type' after 'taught' with infinitive form.

× I really have no idea how I improve my typing, but as I've noticed recently that I I have been faster in typing than ever.

✓ I really have no idea how to improve my typing, but I have noticed recently that I have been typing faster than ever.

Incorrect verb form: 'how I improve my typing' should be 'how to improve my typing' (infinitive after 'know how'). Also unnecessary 'as' and duplicated 'I I.' Use present perfect continuous or present perfect simple appropriately: 'I have been typing faster' or 'I have been faster in typing' is awkward—better 'I have been typing faster.' Remove extra words and correct word order.