Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答要更自然并且直接回应问题。先用一句主题句明确偏好，然后用1-2句具体说明原因和例子，避免语法错误和冗余。注意衔接词如“but”或“however”。

예시: I usually prefer typing for formal work or assignments, but I like handwriting for personal notes and diaries. For example, I type essays because it's faster and easier to edit, however I handwrite my diary because it feels more personal and helps me remember things better.

제안: 回答要更简洁明确，先直接回答“yes”并说明使用哪种设备，然后给出一两个具体原因，用连接词如“because”或“so”。注意用词准确（e.g. “start”改为“start work”或“start my day”）。

예시: Yes, I use my laptop every day. Most of my assignments are written in Word, so it's much more convenient to type and format documents on a laptop.

제안: 回答已经较好，但可以稍微丰富细节以显得更具体。用连接词如“because”或“so”来说明背景或结果，保持句子简短且自然。

예시: I learned to type in primary school during a computer class. The first lesson focused on keyboard basics, so I started practising touch-typing from an early age.

제안: 回答要更自然并纠正词汇错误（例如用“typing skills”而不是“timing skills”）。可以承认目前没有练习，但补充说明原因并提出未来可能的改进方法，使用连接词如“however”或“but”。

예시: Actually I haven't actively tried to improve my typing skills because my major doesn't require high speed. However, I might practice online typing exercises or use typing software in the future to become more efficient when needed.

× Uh, it depends. Performer work or assignment? I prefer typing the full personal note or Diaries. I like writing by my hand.

✓ Uh, it depends. Do you mean performance work or an assignment? I prefer typing personal notes or diaries. I like writing by hand.

句子结构混乱且用词不当：原句“Performer work or assignment?” 缺少疑问词与助动词，表达不完整，应改为完整疑问句。‘the full personal note or Diaries’ 中使用了不恰当的冠词和大小写，且“full”不自然；应改为复数复合名词“personal notes or diaries”。“writing by my hand” 是字面翻译，应使用固定搭配“write by hand”。建议用完整句子，注意冠词和固定搭配的使用。

× Uh, yes. I use my laptop for starting every day. Most of my assignments need to be done on Word, so I have to use a computer.

✓ Yes. I use my laptop to start every day. Most of my assignments need to be done in Word, so I have to use a computer.

介词和用法错误：‘use my laptop for starting every day’ 中不应使用介词 for + 动名词，这里应使用不定式表示目的或习惯动作：‘use my laptop to start every day’。另外‘done on Word’ 更自然的介词为 in Word。建议使用固定搭配（to start, in Word）。

× I learned to type in primary school. We had a computer class back then and the first lesson was about how to use a keyboard.

✓ I learned to type in primary school. We had a computer class back then, and the first lesson was about how to use a keyboard.

原句基本正确，仅在标点和连词处建议加逗号以改善句子流畅度和并列结构。中文说明：句子时态正确（过去时），但在连接两个独立分句时应在 and 前加逗号以提高可读性。

× Oh actually I have never tried to improve my timing skills. I don't think the speed matters that much because my major doesn't require fast typing.

✓ Oh, actually I have never tried to improve my typing skills. I don't think speed matters that much because my major doesn't require fast typing.

词汇使用错误：‘timing skills’ 用词不当，应为与键盘相关的“typing skills”。此外‘the speed’ 可省略定冠词，直接说‘speed’ 更自然。建议注意常用搭配（typing skills, speed matters）。