Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Correct grammar (use 'it depends', 'I type', 'I handwrite', etc.) and avoid repetition. Keep answers to no more than 3–4 sentences.

예시: It depends on what I need to write. For formal documents like letters, applications or my CV, I usually type because it's neater and faster. However, for small notes, addresses or quick reminders, I prefer handwriting since it's more convenient.

제안: Answer directly, then give a brief, specific reason with clearer phrasing. Avoid unclear phrases like 'practicing my health Academy'. Use linking words such as 'but' or 'however' and keep it within 2–3 sentences.

예시: No, I don't type on my laptop every day. I only use it occasionally for studying or important tasks, such as writing assignments or preparing presentations.

제안: Give a clear direct answer with correct tense and concise supporting detail. Fix grammar (e.g., 'In high school, around 14 or 15'). Use one linking phrase like 'because' or 'through' to explain how you learned. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

예시: I learned to type when I was in high school, around 14 or 15 years old. We had a computer course with a teacher who taught us typing and basic computer skills.

제안: Provide a clear routine with specific actions and correct grammar. Use linking words (e.g., 'also', 'because', 'so') and avoid unclear fragments. Mention frequency, tools or exercises (online tests, practice texts) and results. Keep to 3–4 concise sentences.

예시: I improve my typing by practicing regularly on my tablet and laptop, usually for 15–20 minutes a day. I also use online typing tests and exercises to track my speed and accuracy. Because of this routine and the computer lessons at school, my typing has improved noticeably.

× Well, it's actually depends on what I'm going to write.

✓ Well, it actually depends on what I'm going to write.

Use 'it depends' (simple present) for general statements. 'It's depends' incorrectly combines contraction 'it is' with a verb that requires no auxiliary. Remove the contraction 'it's' and use 'it' as subject with 'depends.' Suggestion: say 'It depends' or 'Well, it actually depends on...'.

× If I'm writing some kind of letter, application or CV, I will perform a typing.

✓ If I'm writing a letter, an application, or a CV, I will type it.

'Some kind of' is unnecessary and informal; use articles 'a' or 'an' before singular count nouns. 'Perform a typing' is incorrect collocation; English uses the verb 'type' and can use the pronoun 'it' to refer to the document. Suggestion: use 'type' and correct articles: 'a letter, an application, or a CV.'

× If I'm if there is I'm writing small letters or edges or name and address, I will perform its handwriting.

✓ If I'm writing small notes, labels, or a name and address, I will write them by hand.

Sentence has repetition and word choice errors. 'If I'm if there is' is redundant. 'Small letters or edges' is unclear; likely meant 'small notes' or 'labels.' 'Perform its handwriting' is ungrammatical—use 'write by hand' or 'handwrite.' Ensure nouns agree with pronouns: 'write them by hand.' Suggestion: simplify and choose correct nouns and the verb phrase 'write by hand.'

× No, I don't type on my laptop's keyboard every day, but I do sometimes when it's necessary, when I'm studying or practicing my health Academy or for something important.

✓ No, I don't type on my laptop's keyboard every day, but I do sometimes when it's necessary, for example when I'm studying, practicing at my health academy, or doing something important.

Grammar mostly fine except phrasing and capitalization: 'practicing my health Academy' is unclear—use 'practicing at my health academy' or 'practicing in my health academy.' Also add 'for example' to connect clauses. Ensure proper nouns are not capitalized unless official name. Suggestion: clarify intended meaning and use commas for items.

× When I was in a high school around the 14 or 15 years old, I guess, I learned to type on a keyboard that our there's a coach a computer course where we learn how to choose or how to type on a computer.

✓ When I was in high school, around 14 or 15 years old, I learned to type on a keyboard in a computer course where an instructor taught us how to use and type on a computer.

Use 'in high school' (no article) and correct age expression 'around 14 or 15 years old.' The clause 'that our there's a coach a computer course' is ungrammatical; replace with 'in a computer course where an instructor taught us.' Use past tense 'learned' consistently and correct verbs 'use' and 'type.' Suggestion: simplify sentence and keep past tense consistently.

× So yeah, that's when I learn typing on keyboard in this school level.

✓ So yeah, that's when I learned to type on a keyboard at that school level.

Mixes present 'learn' with past context; use past tense 'learned.' Use infinitive 'to type' rather than gerund 'typing' after 'learned.' Add article 'a' before 'keyboard' and clarify 'at that school level.' Suggestion: keep tense consistent and use 'learned to type.'

× I would say iPad is typing regularly to improve my speed and accuracy.

✓ I would say I practice typing regularly to improve my speed and accuracy.

Original has 'iPad is typing'—likely typo. Use 'practice typing' or 'type regularly.' 'Practice' + gerund is correct. Capitalize 'I.' Suggestion: use 'practice typing regularly.'

× I'll do also learn it at schools 'cause we have we used to have a computer course to practice typing and card to use computer at all.

✓ I also learned it at school because we used to have a computer course to practice typing and to learn how to use a computer.

Unclear structure and tense; 'I'll do also learn' is incorrect—use past 'I also learned.' Fix colloquial ' ’cause' to 'because.' 'Card to use computer at all' is garbled; likely 'to learn how to use a computer.' Maintain past tense for past experience. Suggestion: use clear past tense statements and correct infinitive phrases 'to practice' and 'to learn how to use.'

× But my typing is not so good but I still did improved a lot.

✓ My typing is not very good, but I have improved a lot.

Use contrast with commas and correct tense. 'I still did improved' is ungrammatical—use present perfect 'I have improved' to express change up to now. Also replace 'not so good' with 'not very good' for natural English. Suggestion: use present perfect for improvements over time.