Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Говорите более уверенно и избегайте долгих пауз и звукоподражательных ухов. Исправьте лексические ошибки (например, «topping» → «typing»). Давайте чёткое тематическое предложение и добавьте одно-две конкретные причины с плавными связками. Удерживайтесь в пределах 1–3 предложений, избегайте повторов.

예시: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more convenient. For example, I can edit and save documents easily, which saves time when I study or work.

제안: Сократите заполнители («uh», «um») и говорите плавнее. Начинайте с прямого ответа, затем используйте связку («because», «so», «for example») и конкретизируйте, как это помогает. Упорядочьте мысли — не повторяйте одну и ту же идею двумя разными словами.

예시: Yes, I type on a laptop every day because I complete daily writing assignments on it. As a result, my typing speed and the clarity of my essays have improved.

제안: Уберите неоконченные мысли и повторения. Даёте чёткий ответ о времени, затем одно поддерживающее предложение с детализацией. Избегайте разговорных вставок и следите за грамматикой (например, «on that days» → «at that time»).

예시: I learned to type when I was about ten years old at school. At that time I practiced on a desktop keyboard and found learning to type enjoyable because it was like mastering a new skill.

제안: Больше конкретики: опишите методы практики и используйте связки («by», «so», «for example»). Исправьте опечатки («taping» → «typing») и избегайте повторов. Два-три предложения будет достаточно.

예시: I improve my typing by practicing regularly, for example by completing all my assignments on the keyboard and using online typing exercises. This has increased both my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer topping rather than handwriting because it's faster and more convenient for me.

✓ I prefer typing to handwriting because it's faster and more convenient for me.

The word 'topping' is a misspelling of 'typing'; also 'prefer X to Y' is the correct collocation in English, not 'prefer X rather than Y'. Use 'typing' and the preposition 'to' after 'prefer'. ID:13

× I think uh typing is the most, uh, time saver type of the writing.

✓ I think typing saves the most time when writing.

'Time saver type of the writing' is ungrammatical. Use the verb 'save' with 'time' or the adjective phrase 'the most time-saving' or rephrase as 'saves the most time'. This fixes word order and word choice. ID:13

× Uh, yes, definitely. I type every day on, uh, laptop keyboard, uh, because I do daily assignments on my writing classes and, uh, when I every time type, it improves my typing speed and the effectiveness of my, uh, writings.

✓ Yes, definitely. I type every day on my laptop keyboard because I do daily assignments in my writing classes, and every time I type, it improves my typing speed and the effectiveness of my writing.

Use the possessive pronoun 'my' for 'laptop keyboard', the preposition 'in' for 'classes', move 'every time' to a natural position and use 'writing' as an uncountable noun rather than 'writings'. Also remove unnecessary fillers. ID:12

× I learned how to type on the keyboard when I was studying on at school and maybe I was, uh, 10 years old and, uh, uh, on that days I learned from the desktop keyboard and tapping was, uh, so interesting for me and I didn't.

✓ I learned how to type on the keyboard when I was at school; I was about 10 years old. In those days I learned on a desktop keyboard, and typing was very interesting to me.

Combine and correct prepositions: use 'at school' not 'on at school', 'about 10 years old' is natural, 'in those days' or 'back then' instead of 'on that days', 'learned on a desktop keyboard' is correct, and 'typing' not 'tapping'. The original sentence also ends incomplete ('and I didn't') so remove that fragment or complete it; here it's removed for grammaticality. ID:11

× I think I improved my taping by, uh, practicing a lot.

✓ I think I improved my typing by practicing a lot.

Use the correct noun 'typing' (not 'taping') and avoid unnecessary fillers. 'Improved by practicing' is the correct structure: a verb + -ing after a preposition. ID:8

× I tried tried to accomplish my assignments on uh keyboard rather than handwriting, and I think umm, typing more helped me a lot.

✓ I tried to complete my assignments on the keyboard rather than handwriting, and I think typing more helped me a lot.

Use 'complete' instead of repetitive 'tried tried' and 'on the keyboard' with the definite article. 'Handwriting' is fine as a noun, and 'typing more helped me' is acceptable but could be 'typing more has helped me' for present relevance. ID:12