Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid redundancy and correct article/pronoun errors (e.g., "my handwriting is very beautiful and everyone likes it").

예시: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more accurate. For example, spelling and grammar tools such as Grammarly automatically correct mistakes, which helps me write more confidently.

제안: Use correct verb forms and a clear topic sentence. Say whether you currently type on laptop or desktop and give a brief reason with linking words. Avoid vague phrasing like "used to" if you mean present habit.

예시: I usually type on a laptop because it is lightweight and portable, so I can work anywhere I need to.

제안: Answer directly with a clear time reference and correct grammar. Use a topic sentence stating the age or year, then add a brief context. Fix number and article errors (e.g., "when I was 10 years old").

예시: I learned to type when I was 10 years old at my middle school. That was about 17 years ago, and I practiced regularly in computer class.

제안: Organize the answer with a topic sentence and two concise supporting details using linking words. Use present tense if it is an ongoing method and avoid fillers like "uh". Be specific about the games or techniques and mention results clearly.

예시: I improve my typing by practising with online typing games and timed drills. These tools provide feedback on accuracy and speed, so I learned to type without looking at the keyboard.

× For example you have AI correcting your Grammarly and typing errors.

✓ For example, you have AI correcting your grammar and typing errors.

The word 'Grammarly' (a brand) is incorrect here; the intended noun is 'grammar'. Also a comma should follow 'For example'. Use 'grammar' to refer to language rules rather than the product name.

× Even though my handwriting is a very beautiful and every everyone like my handwriting.

✓ Even though my handwriting is very beautiful and everyone likes my handwriting.

Remove the extra article 'a' before 'very beautiful' because 'handwriting' is uncountable here. 'Every everyone' is redundant; use 'everyone'. Subject-verb agreement requires 'likes' for 'everyone'.

× I used to type a laptop because it is very light and you can carry everywhere you want.

✓ I used to type on a laptop because it is very light and you can carry it wherever you want.

Use the preposition 'on' with 'type on a laptop'. The article 'a' before 'laptop' is fine, but the verb phrase should be 'type on'. Add the object pronoun 'it' after 'carry'. Use 'wherever' instead of 'everywhere' for the intended meaning.

× I didn't learn how to tape on a keyboard when I was a 10 years old.

✓ I didn't learn how to type on a keyboard when I was 10 years old.

Correct verb 'tape' to 'type'. Do not use the article 'a' before ages: say 'when I was 10 years old' or 'when I was ten'.

× That time I was in a middle school in my country and now I'm a 27 years, so it was 17 years ago.

✓ At that time I was in middle school in my country, and now I'm 27 years old, so it was 17 years ago.

Use 'At that time' for time reference. 'Middle school' does not need 'a'. Say 'I'm 27 years old' rather than 'a 27 years'. Add commas for clarity.

× I used games to improve my typing and also I had a lot of and a lot of typing practices which is in game or something you have in your laptop.

✓ I used games to improve my typing, and I had a lot of typing practice in games or other programs on my laptop.

Simplify redundant phrase 'a lot of and a lot of'. Use uncountable 'typing practice' rather than plural 'typing practices'. Use 'in games or other programs on my laptop' for clarity and correct prepositions.

× Uh, they give you accuracy and fast timing.

✓ They help you improve accuracy and speed.

'Give you accuracy and fast timing' is unnatural. Use 'help you improve accuracy and speed' to express the idea clearly and use correct noun forms.

× Then you will learn without seeing in the keyboard.

✓ Then you will learn to type without looking at the keyboard.

Use the infinitive 'to type' and the correct phrase 'without looking at the keyboard'. 'Seeing in the keyboard' is incorrect preposition and verb choice.