Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it's slightly long and contains some redundancy. Make a concise topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Also vary vocabulary (e.g., use 'efficient' or 'time-saving') to show range.

예시: I prefer typing because it's much faster and more efficient than handwriting. For example, I can quickly edit documents and share them with classmates online, which saves time when I'm working on group assignments.

제안: Good content but slightly repetitive of the previous answer and a bit unstructured. Start with a direct sentence, then give one concrete detail and use a linking word (e.g., 'because' or 'so') to connect ideas. Avoid repeating the same points.

예시: I use a laptop keyboard every day for my studies and work. Because most of my research and assignments are online, typing allows me to edit drafts quickly and organise information more efficiently.

제안: The answer gives a time but is grammatically unclear and disfluent. Give a clear topic sentence stating when you learned, then add a brief supporting detail about how you learned. Use past tense and correct sentence structure.

예시: I learned to type when I was in sixth grade at school. My father bought a new computer then, so I practised regularly on it and gradually became faster.

제안: Your meaning is understandable but the response is disorganised and contains errors. Provide a clear method for improvement with specific examples (apps, exercises, frequency), link ideas with words like 'since' or 'by', and keep sentences concise.

예시: I improve my typing by using online typing apps and doing timed practice sessions every day. Since I started at school, I now practise for 20 minutes daily and work on accuracy with exercises that focus on common letter combinations.

× I definitely prefer typing, mainly because it's so much faster and more convenient, especially for documents, and also it's really easy to edit and share my work with others which is important for my studies.

✓ I definitely prefer typing, mainly because it's so much faster and more convenient, especially for documents, and it's really easy to edit and share my work with others, which is important for my studies.

The original sentence omits a comma before the nonrestrictive relative clause 'which is important for my studies.' Adding the comma clarifies that the clause adds extra information. This is a punctuation/structure issue related to article/phrase clarity; ensure nonrestrictive clauses are set off with commas to improve readability and correctness.

× Yeah, I use laptop keyboard every single day basically for my studies and work, most of my research and on the computer, and I find typing much faster and easier to edit than writing by hand.

✓ Yes, I use a laptop keyboard every single day, basically for my studies and work, doing most of my research on the computer, and I find typing much faster and easier to edit than writing by hand.

The noun phrase 'laptop keyboard' needs the indefinite article 'a' to be grammatical. Also, 'most of my research and on the computer' was ungrammatical; it should be 'doing most of my research on the computer.' Use articles with singular countable nouns and ensure parallel structure in lists.

× Around 6th grade in school when for me my dad is my dad was about a new computer and from this time to now I learn typing in a laptop.

✓ Around sixth grade at school, when my dad bought a new computer, I began learning to type on a laptop and have continued since then.

The original mixes present and past incorrectly ('is my dad was about a new computer') and uses incorrect verb forms ('I learn typing'). Use past simple 'bought' for a completed past action, 'began learning' to indicate the start, and present perfect 'have continued' to show continuation to now. Also use 'to type' (infinitive) and 'on a laptop' (preposition + article).

× About my improving typing app, I started learning in my school edges and since then I have practiced really well at now I really practice it and can easily type in a very long documents.

✓ Regarding improving my typing, I started learning at school, and since then I have practiced regularly; now I can easily type very long documents.

The original sentence has awkward phrasing ('About my improving typing app', 'school edges', 'practiced really well at now') and incorrect article use ('a very long documents'). The correction fixes word choice ('regarding', 'at school'), verb collocations ('practiced regularly'), tense consistency ('have practiced' then 'now I can'), and article/number agreement ('very long documents' with no 'a'). Ensure clear subject-action structure and proper collocations.