Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar and sentence structure: include a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms and articles, and avoid redundancy. Use one or two supporting details with linking words. Be concise and natural.

예시: I prefer typing because it is more convenient and much faster than handwriting. Moreover, I always carry a portable keyboard, so typing fits my mobile lifestyle.

제안: Make a direct, grammatical statement and organise supporting details with linking words. Fix verb forms and word order, and avoid repeating the same idea. Aim for two to three coherent sentences.

예시: Yes, I type on my laptop every day. I usually bring a portable keyboard, an iPad and a notebook with me, so I can work wherever I go.

제안: Provide a clear past-tense response with a concise timeline and one supporting detail. Correct past verb forms, articles and phrasing. Use a linking word if adding extra information.

예시: I learned to type when I was in elementary school, around second grade. There was a computer class where the teacher showed us the basics of typing.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence and add a specific detail or example. Use linking words and correct grammar. Mention a practice method and a brief result to show improvement.

예시: I improve my typing by playing online games that require quick text chat with teammates. As a result, my typing speed increased because I practise short, fast messages regularly.

× I prefer typing because it more convenient and it much faster than writing by hand.

✓ I prefer typing because it is more convenient and much faster than writing by hand.

Missing the verb 'is' (a linking verb) before adjectives and unnecessary second 'it'. Use 'it is more convenient' and 'much faster' without repeating 'it'. Suggestion: include the appropriate form of 'to be' when linking subject and adjective (present simple).

× And I always carry a portable keyboard so it just suits me.

✓ And I always carry a portable keyboard, so it suits me.

Unnecessary word 'just' and awkward placement. 'It suits me' correctly refers to 'a portable keyboard'. Suggestion: remove unnecessary fillers and use a comma before coordinating conjunction 'so'.

× Yes, I do typing on my laptop every day because nowadays I carry a portable keyboard and iPad and a notebook to anywhere and I can work anywhere just.

✓ Yes, I type on my laptop every day because I usually carry a portable keyboard, an iPad, and a notebook with me and can work anywhere.

Use 'type' rather than 'do typing' (incorrect verb phrase). Capitalize 'iPad'. 'to anywhere' is ungrammatical; use 'with me' and 'anywhere' without 'to'. Remove trailing 'just'. Suggestion: use simple present 'I type' and list items with articles and 'with me'.

× I learn typing on a keyboard.

✓ I learned typing on a keyboard.

The learner refers to a past event (learning as a child) so past simple 'learned' is required, not present 'learn'. Suggestion: use past tense when describing past experiences.

× When I was in a elementary school, I think might be second grade, there was a subject called computer and the teacher taught me to type and I run it.

✓ When I was in elementary school, I think it was second grade. There was a subject called computers, and the teacher taught me to type and I practiced it.

Use 'in elementary school' (no article) and split into clearer sentences. 'I think might be second grade' is ungrammatical—use 'I think it was second grade'. 'A subject called computer' should be 'called computers' or 'computer class'. 'I run it' is incorrect; 'I practiced it' or 'I used it' fits. Suggestion: remove unnecessary articles, use past tense, and choose correct verb 'practiced'.

× How do you improve your typing?

✓ How do you improve your typing?

This question is fine as is; it uses present simple correctly to ask about habitual actions. No correction needed.

× I improve my typing when I play online video game because I have to talk to the friends online with text and that's why I can learn to type fast.

✓ I improved my typing when I played online video games because I had to text friends online, and that's why I learned to type quickly.

The student describes past improvement related to past gaming, so use past tense verbs: 'improved', 'played', 'had to', 'learned'. 'Video game' should be plural if referring generally. 'Talk to the friends online with text' is awkward; use 'text friends online'. Use adverb 'quickly' rather than adjective 'fast' for verb modification. Suggestion: match tense consistently and use correct adverb forms and plural nouns where appropriate.