Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Structure your answer: start with a clear topic sentence stating preference, then give two concise specific reasons using linking words. Avoid hesitation and repetition, and correct grammar (e.g., use past participles and modal forms correctly). Work on pronunciation and fluency to remove filler words like 'uh' and 'like'.

예시: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is much faster and easier to edit. For example, on a computer I can quickly delete and rearrange sentences, which saves time. Also, typed documents are neater and easier to share with colleagues.

제안: Provide a clear topic sentence and a specific detail. Avoid short, fragmented replies and fill pauses. Use correct verb forms and expand slightly with linking words to show coherence (e.g., 'because' or 'so').

예시: Yes, I type every day. As an accountant I use both desktop and laptop keyboards at work because I need to prepare reports and spreadsheets, so typing is part of my daily routine.

제안: Begin with a clear, correctly formed sentence stating the time, then add one supporting detail. Fix grammar (e.g., 'I don't remember exactly' and 'it started when my teacher introduced us'). Avoid repetition and hesitations.

예시: I don't remember the exact date, but I learned to type around high school. It started when my computer teacher introduced us to basic typing and keyboard skills in class.

제안: Make a concise topic sentence followed by two specific methods, using linking words like 'for example' or 'also'. Correct grammar (e.g., 'One of the best ways is to practice regularly' and 'memorize the keyboard'). Keep to 2–3 sentences to avoid rambling.

예시: One of the best ways to improve typing is to practice regularly and build muscle memory. For example, I use online typing exercises every day and focus on accuracy first, then gradually increase speed.

× I sometime I think it's also easy to re correct it because you can't delete it easily on the computers while typing.

✓ Sometimes I think it's also easy to correct it because you can't delete it easily on computers while typing.

Errors: duplicate 'I' and incorrect spacing in 're correct'; 'sometime' should be 'sometimes'; 'the computers' unnecessarily definite. Use 'correct' (base verb) not 're correct'. Suggestion: Remove the duplicate pronoun, use 'sometimes', use 'correct' and omit 'the' before 'computers' to make sentence natural.

× Sometimes it's why write by handwriting you cannot just like delete it and it's very it could be slow.

✓ When you write by hand, you cannot simply delete it, and it can be very slow.

Errors: 'Sometimes it's why' is ungrammatical conjunction use; 'write by handwriting' should be 'write by hand' or 'write by handwriting' replaced; colloquial filler 'just like' should be 'simply'; awkward 'it's very it could be slow' redundancy. Suggestion: Use proper subordinating conjunction 'when', replace 'write by handwriting' with 'write by hand', remove filler phrases and choose one modal 'can' for speed.

× As an accountant I used lots of keyboards and laptops, so I do it almost every day.

✓ As an accountant I have used many keyboards and laptops, so I use them almost every day.

Errors: 'used' needs present perfect 'have used' to show experience relevant to now; 'lots of' is informal—use 'many'; ambiguous 'I do it' should specify 'I use them'. Suggestion: Use present perfect for past experience with present relevance and match plural object with plural pronoun.

× Umm, if at work.

✓ Umm, I use them at work.

Error: fragment lacking a subject and verb. 'If at work' is incomplete. Suggestion: Complete the sentence by stating the subject and verb to clarify meaning.

× Oh, I don't, I don't. I I remember exactly when I started learning how to do a keyboard.

✓ Oh, I don't remember exactly when I started learning how to use a keyboard.

Errors: Repetition 'I don't, I don't. I I'; 'do a keyboard' is incorrect verb collocation—use 'use a keyboard'. Suggestion: Remove repetitions and use correct verb-object collocation.

× I would say it's around my high school.

✓ I would say it was around high school.

Errors: 'it's around my high school' mixes present reference with past event; use past 'was' or 'during high school' to indicate when the learning began. Suggestion: Use past tense or 'during' for clarity.

× It start with my teacher introduce us, umm, how to work on computers.

✓ It started with my teacher introducing us, umm, to how to use computers.

Errors: 'It start' should be 'It started' (past tense); 'my teacher introduce us' incorrect tense and form—use gerund 'introducing us'; 'how to work on computers' awkward phrase—use 'how to use computers'. Suggestion: Use past tense and gerund after 'started' and a clearer verb for using computers.

× In my opinion is one of the best way to improve typing skill is to do it frequently enough and until you get used to and remember or memorize all the letter onto a keyboard and practice like every days and so that you can have the improvement.

✓ In my opinion, one of the best ways to improve typing skills is to practice frequently until you get used to the keyboard and remember all the letters, practicing every day so that you can improve.

Errors: multiple structural problems: missing subject after 'In my opinion', singular/plural mismatches ('way' vs 'ways', 'skill' vs 'skills', 'letter' vs 'letters'), incorrect preposition 'onto', awkward 'practice like every days', and redundancy 'remember or memorize'. Suggestion: Provide a clear subject, ensure noun-number agreement, use 'practice' as the verb, 'get used to the keyboard', 'remember all the letters', and 'every day' (two words) for daily practice.