Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 문법과 자연스러운 표현을 개선하세요. 현재 문장은 시제·단어 형태 오류와 반복이 있습니다. 예를 들어 'I usually typing'은 잘못된 형태입니다. 더 자연스럽게 말하려면 주제문을 간결히 말하고 이유를 하나 또는 두 개로 구체화하세요. 연결어(for example, because)를 사용해 흐름을 매끄럽게 하세요.

예시: I prefer typing to handwriting because I use my computer and smartphone every day. For example, I type emails and notes quickly, which saves me time.

제안: 발음 채움음('Umm')과 문장 연결을 줄이고 문법을 다듬으세요. 'I don't have desktop'는 관사 누락 오류입니다. 또 'online site'보다 'online' 또는 'online platform'이 자연스럽습니다. 하나의 선명한 문장으로 답한 뒤 이유를 덧붙이세요.

예시: Yes, I usually type on my laptop because I don't have a desktop computer. Also, most of my university assignments are submitted through an online platform.

제안: 불필요한 단어를 제거하고 시제·어순을 자연스럽게 고치세요. 'elementary school student' 대신 'I was in elementary school'가 자연스럽습니다. 'That is after school schedule'는 어색하므로 구체적으로 언제 수업이 있었는지 설명하세요.

예시: I learned to type when I was in elementary school during computer class. Those lessons were part of the after-school program, so I practiced regularly.

제안: 중복 표현을 줄이고 프로그램의 구체적 사용법과 빈도를 제시하세요. 예를 들어 어떤 프로그램을 사용하는지, 하루에 얼마나 연습하는지 말하면 구체성이 높아집니다. 연결어(also, for example)를 자연스럽게 사용하세요.

예시: I mainly use typing programs to improve my skills. For example, I practice on both Korean and English exercises for about 20 minutes a day, focusing on accuracy and speed.

× Well, actually I prefer typing because I mainly use the computer and smartphone, so I usually typing.

✓ Well, actually I prefer typing because I mainly use the computer and smartphone, so I usually type.

The verb 'usually' requires the base form for habitual actions; 'typing' after 'usually' is incorrect. Use the simple present 'type' to describe regular habits. Suggestion: Use subject + usually + base verb (I usually type).

× Yes I do Umm, I usually use my laptop because I don't have desktop.

✓ Yes I do. Umm, I usually use my laptop because I don't have a desktop.

When referring to a singular countable noun (desktop) in a general sense, use the indefinite article 'a'. Missing article causes ungrammatical noun phrase. Suggestion: Use 'a desktop' for one unspecified desktop computer.

× And my university assignment is online site.

✓ And my university assignments are on an online site.

The original has incorrect noun form and preposition. 'Assignment' should be plural if referring to multiple tasks, or keep singular with 'is on an online site'. Also 'online site' needs the preposition 'on' and an article 'an'. Suggestion: Use 'assignments are on an online site' for clarity.

× Well, when I was in elementary school student, I learned typing in computer class.

✓ Well, when I was an elementary school student, I learned to type in computer class.

'Elementary school student' needs an article 'an' and the verb 'learned' is followed by infinitive 'to type' rather than gerund 'typing' in this context. Also 'in computer class' is acceptable but ensure article if needed. Suggestion: 'learned to type' and include 'an' before the noun.

× That is after school schedule.

✓ That was part of the after-school schedule.

Original lacks appropriate prepositions and structure. Use 'part of' to indicate inclusion, and hyphenate 'after-school' as adjective. Also past reference 'was' matches 'when I was'. Suggestion: Use 'was part of the after-school schedule'.

× I mainly use typing programs that improve my typing skill and also it has Korean typing and English typing.

✓ I mainly use typing programs that improve my typing skills, and they include both Korean and English typing.

'Use typing programs' is okay but 'typing skill' should be plural 'skills'. 'It has' incorrectly refers to 'programs' (plural) so use 'they include'. Also listing languages better expressed as 'Korean and English typing'. Suggestion: Ensure subject-verb agreement and plural 'skills'.