Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 문법과 발화의 자연스러움을 높이고 불필요한 중복과 음성적 충동(uh, umm)을 줄이세요. 비교할 때는 명확한 근거(예: 속도, 편리성, 수정 용이성)를 간결하게 제시하고, 문장 구조는 최대 3문장 내로 유지하세요. 또한 'more faster' 같은 중복 비교 표현을 고치고 감정 표현은 간결하게 표현하세요.

예시: I prefer typing to handwriting because it's faster and more convenient. For example, it's easy to edit and share documents online. However, handwriting can feel more personal for letters or cards.

제안: 말을 더 간결하고 정확하게 만드세요. 중복 표현(‘daily, everyday’, ‘desktop desktop’)과 불확실한 표현(umm, I am typing it)을 제거하고, 주제 문장→구체적 세부정보 순으로 말하세요. 또한 'tablet'과 'Bluetooth keyboard'의 관계를 명확히 설명하세요.

예시: Yes, I type every day, but I don't use a desktop because I don't own one. Instead, I usually use a tablet with a Bluetooth keyboard for typing.

제안: 시간 표현과 서술을 단정적으로 정리하세요. 불확실한 발화(uh, like, questions mid-sentence)를 줄이고, 경험을 명확히 설명하세요. 예: 시작 시기 → 어떤 프로그램이었는지 → 결과(참가한 경험 또는 성과)를 간결하게 말하세요.

예시: I started learning to type around third or fourth grade at primary school. My school had a typing program with a speed-typing competition, and I participated even though I didn't win.

제안: 어휘 선택을 정확하게 하고 불필요한 반복과 어음(uh, umm)을 줄이세요. 'ghost write'나 'shadow type' 같은 표현은 모호하므로 구체적으로 어떤 연습을 하는지(복사 타이핑, 타이핑 게임, 온라인 연습 사이트 등) 설명하세요. 사이트 이름을 말할 때는 정확히 발음하거나 일반적 설명으로 대체하세요.

예시: I practice by copying passages from English books and using online typing websites to improve my speed and accuracy. I also do timed exercises to track my progress.

× it is more convenient and the speed of typing is uh, it's more faster, uh, way more faster than the handwriting.

✓ it is more convenient and the speed of typing is faster than handwriting.

'More faster' is redundant because 'faster' already comparative; use either 'faster' or 'more fast' (the latter uncommon). Also omit unnecessary fillers and duplicate subjects. Remove 'the' before 'handwriting' for natural phrasing.

× Although handwriting does have this sentimental umm, fee, uh, you know, brings sentimental feeling, but typing is more preferred these days.

✓ Although handwriting does have a sentimental feel, typing is more popular these days.

Using both 'although' and 'but' is redundant; choose one. 'Fee' is incorrect for 'feel' and 'brings sentimental feeling' is wordy. 'More preferred' is awkward; use 'more popular' or 'preferred'.

× At this moment, yes, I am typing it daily, everyday.

✓ At the moment, yes, I type every day.

'At this moment' can be 'at the moment'; 'am typing it daily' suggests an action happening right now — use simple present 'I type every day' for habitual actions. 'Everyday' (one word) is an adjective; use 'every day' for frequency.

× No, because there is no desktop desktop that I'm possessing.

✓ No, because I don't own a desktop computer.

'Possessing' is unnatural here; use 'own'. 'There is no desktop that I'm possessing' is awkward; rephrase to active subject 'I don't own a desktop computer.'

× But umm, I normally like generally use tablet.

✓ But I generally like to use a tablet.

Word order and choice: use 'generally' or 'normally' (not both), and 'use a tablet' requires the article 'a'. Add 'to' after 'like' for verb infinitive.

× So Bluetooth keyboards are my uh, daily keyboard that I'm using.

✓ So Bluetooth keyboards are the ones I use every day.

'Daily keyboard that I'm using' is awkward. Use 'the ones I use every day' or 'my daily keyboards.' Matches plural 'keyboards' with plural reference.

× I started learning how to type on a keyboard when I was about third grade to primary school, 3rd grade to 4th grade.

✓ I started learning to type when I was in third or fourth grade.

Use 'started learning to type' (infinitive) and 'in third or fourth grade' is the natural expression. Avoid repeating '3rd grade to 4th grade' and 'primary school' unnecessarily.

× That's when I started like this program, school program where you there is a competition about like speed typing competition and I wasn't actually. Excelled anyone?

✓ That's when I joined a school program that had a speed-typing competition, but I didn't actually excel or win.

Original sentence is fragmented and contains filler words ('like', 'you there is'). Clarify: 'joined a school program that had a speed-typing competition' and express inability: 'I didn't actually excel or win.' Remove question 'Excelled anyone?' which is ungrammatical.

× I often uh, ghost write and shadow type, uh, literatures.

✓ I often ghostwrite and shadow-type literature.

Combine 'ghostwrite' and 'shadow-type' as verbs without space; 'literature' is uncountable, so use singular 'literature' not 'literatures.' Remove filler 'uh'.

× There is this uh, site called typo literature and there I can umm, type umm, the umm, English literature well.

✓ There is a site called Typo Literature where I can type English literature well.

Avoid filler words. Use 'where' instead of 'and there' for smoother clause connection. Capitalize site name if proper noun; 'English literature' normally doesn't need 'the.'