Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise, correct grammar (use subject-verb agreement and articles), avoid filler words (umm), and add a clear reason with a specific example. Keep the answer to 2–3 sentences and use linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

예시: I prefer typing to handwriting because I type much faster and can finish my work on time. For example, when I take notes on my laptop during lectures, I can record more information accurately and organize it quickly.

제안: Remove fillers, combine ideas clearly, and use precise vocabulary. Mention one clear reason and a brief example. Limit to 2–3 sentences and use linking words such as 'because' or 'so'.

예시: I usually type on a laptop because its compact keyboard is comfortable and portable. For instance, I often take my laptop to school or coffee shops to do assignments and type on the go.

제안: Correct tense and article usage, remove fillers, and organize information logically: state when, briefly mention how you learned, and give a short specific detail (e.g., website name, practice method). Avoid repeating phrases. Keep within 3–4 sentences.

예시: I learned to type during the MCO lockdown when we had to study from home. I used typing.com to practise letter and number accuracy, and my family even had friendly typing competitions to make learning more fun.

제안: Use correct verb forms and concise structure. State the methods clearly, add specific frequency and result, and avoid filler words. Use linking words like 'for example' and 'also' to connect ideas. Keep to 3 sentences maximum.

예시: I improve my typing by practising on typing.com for 10–15 minutes every day, where I complete lessons and timed tests. I also join online competitions with friends and occasionally have family contests, which motivates me to increase my speed and accuracy.

× My preferred typing because I can type very fast and I can finish all my work in time as umm my typing skills is good and if I write I need to erase everything and do it again.

✓ I prefer typing because I can type very fast and finish all my work on time, as my typing skills are good; if I write by hand I often have to erase everything and do it again.

Errors: incorrect verb (prefer vs preferred) and sentence structure issues (run-on sentence), singular/plural agreement ('skills is' should be 'skills are'), incorrect preposition ('in time' -> 'on time'), and unclear phrase 'if I write' (specify 'by hand'). Suggestion: use correct verb forms, ensure subject-verb agreement, break long ideas into clauses with appropriate conjunctions or punctuation, and choose correct prepositions.

× So I prefer to type as typing can umm use better things and type faster.

✓ So I prefer to type because typing lets me use better tools and type faster.

Errors: awkward structure 'typing can use better things' and filler 'umm'; incorrect verb choice and unclear noun ('things' -> 'tools'). Suggestion: replace fillers, use 'because' for reason, use precise nouns ('tools') and correct verbs ('lets me use').

× I prefer to type on the laptop keyboard as it is umm, smaller, so I like the feeling of typing on a laptop keyboard and I usually bring my laptop around to schools and umm other coffee shops so I use my laptop to type.

✓ I prefer typing on a laptop keyboard because it is smaller, and I like the feeling of typing on it. I usually take my laptop to school and to coffee shops to use for typing.

Errors: article use ('the laptop keyboard' -> 'a laptop keyboard' or 'a laptop's keyboard'); redundancy and filler words; incorrect preposition 'bring my laptop around to schools' -> 'take my laptop to school'; repetition of 'laptop'. Suggestion: remove fillers, avoid repetition by using pronouns, use appropriate articles and prepositions.

× I learnt to type on the keyboard when it was MCO time where everyone needs to study at home and I started to learn umm in a website calledtyping.com which I can learn all the typing skills and where the words is and all the numbers.

✓ I learned to type on the keyboard during the MCO, when everyone had to study at home. I started learning on a website called typing.com, where I learned all the typing skills and where the words and numbers are provided.

Errors: past tense consistency ('learnt/started' with present 'needs' and 'can'); use 'during' for time period; subject-verb agreement ('words is' -> 'words are'); awkward phrasing. Suggestion: keep past tense throughout when describing past events, correct agreement, and use clearer relative clauses.

× So I learn it and we usually have competition in our home with our parents with.

✓ So I learned it, and we usually have typing competitions at home with our parents.

Errors: tense ('learn' -> 'learned'), awkward and redundant wording ('in our home with our parents with'), sentence structure fragment. Suggestion: use past tense and concise phrasing; 'typing competitions at home with our parents' is clear.

× I improved my typing by learn by using the link called typing.com and there is also competition in it that I can compete with other friends online to be better in typing.

✓ I improved my typing by learning through the website typing.com, which also has competitions where I can compete with other friends online to improve my typing.

Errors: incorrect verb form ('learn' -> 'learning'), tense inconsistency ('improved' past with 'is' present), awkward preposition 'by using the link called'. Suggestion: use gerund after 'by', maintain past tense for past actions or present for habitual activities, and use clearer nouns ('website').

× So I usually play them every day for about 10 to 15 minutes a day.

✓ I usually play them every day for about 10 to 15 minutes.

Errors: redundancy ('every day' and 'a day'); 'play them' is vague but acceptable if context is clear. Suggestion: remove repetition and keep concise time expressions.

× Then I will also conduct umm competition with our parents at home for typing.

✓ Then I also have competitions with my parents at home for typing.

Errors: awkward future tense 'will also conduct' for habitual action, filler 'umm', missing article ('conduct competition' -> 'have competitions'), and pronoun inconsistency ('our parents' -> 'my parents'). Suggestion: use present simple for habitual actions, remove fillers, and use correct articles and possessive pronouns.