Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and fluent: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh), and add one specific reason with a linking word. Use varied vocabulary (e.g., "prefer" "because") and limit to 2–3 sentences.

예시: I prefer handwriting because it feels more tangible and helps me focus. Moreover, it reduces eye strain since I already spend many hours looking at screens for work.

제안: Give a direct topic sentence, remove redundancy, and correct tense/grammar (e.g., "when I type emails"). Provide one clear supporting detail showing frequency or purpose and use a linking word.

예시: I type every day on my laptop because I handle emails and prepare order documents. For example, as a full-service supervisor I regularly type orders and financial reports for work.

제안: Provide a clear time-reference sentence first, avoid contradictions and fillers, and use past tense consistently. Add one specific detail about age or what you learned, linked logically.

예시: I learned to type at school when I was in second grade. In those computer classes we practised basic typing and simple programs, which helped me become fluent early on.

제안: Answer directly about current improvement methods if asked in present tense. Keep sentences short, use clear linking words (e.g., "now", "also"), correct grammar, and give a specific method or resource used to practice.

예시: I improve my typing by practising regularly with online typing exercises and timed tests. I also set aside 15 minutes each day to do drills and track my speed and accuracy, which has steadily increased.

× I like handwriting because this gives me a comfort that I am really doing something.

✓ I like handwriting because it gives me the comfort of knowing that I am really doing something.

Sentence structure and incorrect use of demonstrative pronoun; replace 'this gives me a comfort that' with 'it gives me the comfort of knowing that' for natural English and correct noun phrase usage. Use 'it' to refer to 'handwriting' (pronoun agreement) and 'comfort of knowing' is the correct idiom. (Problem types: 12 Pronoun use; 26 Sentence structure).

× It also helps me to avoid coming in contact with screen for a long period of time because spending a lot of time on computers or laptops gives the eye strain.

✓ It also helps me avoid coming into contact with screens for long periods of time because spending a lot of time on computers or laptops causes eye strain.

Incorrect preposition and article use, pluralization, and awkward adverb placement. Use 'avoid coming into contact with' (correct preposition), 'screens' (plural) and 'for long periods of time' (natural phrasing). Replace 'gives the eye strain' with 'causes eye strain'. (Problem types: 11 Incorrect use of prepositions; 1 Singular and plural issue; 13 Incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs).

× Personally, I use my personal laptop for the typing, specially when I used to do some e-mail or print various things that are important for my work.

✓ Personally, I use my personal laptop for typing, especially when I need to send emails or print various things that are important for my work.

Plural and word choice issues: remove unnecessary article before 'typing' and use 'especially' (correct spelling). 'Used to do' is incorrect for habitual present; use 'need to' or present habitual. Use 'emails' (plural) and 'send emails' rather than 'do some e-mail'. (Problem types: 1 Singular and plural issue; 6 Present tense issue; 13 Incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs).

× For instance, as a full service supervisor, it is my daily routine to type all the orders and print expense and profit.

✓ For instance, as a full-service supervisor, it is my daily routine to type all the orders and print expense and profit reports.

Sentence clarity and missing noun: 'full-service' needs a hyphen (adjective order), and 'print expense and profit' lacks a noun—use 'reports'. This corrects sentence structure and makes the meaning clear. (Problem types: 18 Incorrect order of adjectives; 26 Sentence structure).

× I was not a technology lover when I was a child, but we do have computer classes in our school where we have to go to the computer and Start learning uh, typing and doing various uh functions on computers at very early age.

✓ I was not a technology lover when I was a child, but we had computer classes at school where we had to go to the computer and start learning typing and various computer functions at a very early age.

Tense inconsistency and capitalization errors: maintain past tense ('had' not 'do have') to match 'when I was a child'. Lowercase 'start' and remove filler 'uh'. Use 'a very early age'. (Problem types: 6 Present tense issue; 5 Past tense issue; 10 Verb in the present participle form).

× It's around second standard.

✓ It was around second grade.

Tense and register: Use past tense 'was' to match context. 'Second standard' is non-standard English; 'second grade' or 'second year' is natural. (Problem types: 5 Past tense issue; 13 Incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs).

× I started doing typing quite fluently.

✓ I started typing quite fluently.

Incorrect verb form: after 'started', use the base verb or gerund correctly; 'started typing' is more natural than 'started doing typing'. (Problem types: 8 Verb + -ing form; 6 Present tense issue).

× When I was a child, I used to have computer classes at my school and to with the daily practice of typing, I really am the speed of my typing in a very early age.

✓ When I was a child, I used to have computer classes at my school, and with daily typing practice I really improved the speed of my typing at a very early age.

Sentence structure and verb tense errors: remove extraneous 'to', change 'am' to 'improved' to indicate change over time, and rephrase for clarity: 'with daily typing practice' and 'at a very early age'. (Problem types: 26 Sentence structure; 5 Past tense issue).

× For instance, we have a computer class every week where we learn a different functions how to use computer in a various ways such as typing, trying or.

✓ For instance, we had a computer class every week where we learned different functions and how to use a computer in various ways, such as typing and trying out programs.

Adjective order, article use, tense and incomplete sentence: use past tense 'had' and 'learned' to match context, 'different functions' (no 'a'), 'how to use a computer' (add article), 'in various ways', and complete the list with 'trying out programs' instead of 'trying or'. (Problem types: 18 Incorrect order of adjectives; 17 Incorrect use of the definite article; 5 Past tense issue).