Travelling— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答方向基本正确，但表达非常不清晰，存在大量重复和语法错误，如“not just to same many different cultural”和“sit the chess”。应先直接说明喜欢靠窗座位，再用 because 解释原因，并补充一个具体结果。注意使用正确搭配，例如“see different views/scenery”和“sit by the window”。避免重复使用“I think”和“we can say”。

예시: Yes, definitely. I prefer sitting by the window because I can enjoy different views and watch the scenery change during the journey. It also makes the trip more relaxing and enjoyable.

제안: 回答包含了具体地点和旅行时长，内容较丰富，但需要改进时态、句子结构和逻辑。应将“when I were young”改为“when I was young”，将“my parents with me to go”改为“my parents took me to Beijing”，并说明七天旅行为什么算是漫长旅程。此外，去北京不一定等于了解“other countries”，应改为“Chinese culture”或“different cities”。避免重复“deeper”，并使用连接词使细节衔接更自然。

예시: Yes, I did. When I was young, my parents took me to Beijing, and we spent seven days there. It felt like a long journey because we travelled by train and visited many famous historical sites. The trip helped me understand more about Chinese history and culture.

× Absolutely yes, because I think traveling is not just to same many different cultural and we can say we can say many different views sit the sit the chess

✓ Absolutely yes, because I think traveling is not just about seeing many different cultures and many different views while sitting in a seat.

介词 about 后面应接动名词形式，因此不能使用 to same。应使用 seeing。建议记住：about、after、before、without 等介词后通常接动词 -ing 形式。

× Absolutely yes, because I think traveling is not just to same many different cultural and we can say we can say many different views sit the sit the chess

✓ Absolutely yes, because I think traveling is not just about seeing many different cultures and many different views while sitting in a seat.

many 后面必须接可数名词复数。cultural 是形容词，不能直接放在 many different 后面表示“文化”；这里应使用名词复数 cultures。

× Absolutely yes, because I think traveling is not just to same many different cultural and we can say we can say many different views sit the sit the chess

✓ Absolutely yes, because I think traveling is not just about seeing many different cultures and many different views while sitting in a seat.

表示“坐在座位上”时，通常使用 sit in a seat，而不是 sit the seat。建议结合固定搭配记忆介词，例如 sit in a seat、sit by the window。

× To be honest, yes, when I were young, my parents with me to go to Beijing and we had only seven days long journey.

✓ To be honest, yes. When I was young, my parents and I went to Beijing, and we went on a seven-day journey.

叙述童年经历时应使用一般过去时。主语是 I，所以 be 动词的过去式应为 was，而不是 were。建议记住：I was，he/she/it was，you/we/they were。

× To be honest, yes, when I were young, my parents with me to go to Beijing and we had only seven days long journey.

✓ To be honest, yes. When I was young, my parents and I went to Beijing, and we went on a seven-day journey.

my parents with me 不能正确连接两个并列主语。应使用连词 and，构成 my parents and I。并列主语表示“我的父母和我”。

× To be honest, yes, when I were young, my parents with me to go to Beijing and we had only seven days long journey.

✓ To be honest, yes. When I was young, my parents and I went to Beijing, and we went on a seven-day journey.

原句中 my parents with me to go 缺少正确的谓语结构。应改为 my parents and I went to Beijing。建议确保每个完整句子都有清晰的主语和谓语。

× To be honest, yes, when I were young, my parents with me to go to Beijing and we had only seven days long journey.

✓ To be honest, yes. When I was young, my parents and I went to Beijing, and we went on a seven-day journey.

journey 是可数名词单数，前面需要冠词或其他限定词。这里使用 a，构成 a seven-day journey。由数字和名词构成复合形容词时，名词通常使用单数形式。

× To be honest, yes, when I were young, my parents with me to go to Beijing and we had only seven days long journey.

✓ To be honest, yes. When I was young, my parents and I went to Beijing, and we went on a seven-day journey.

seven-day 在这里是复合形容词，修饰 journey，因此 day 要使用单数形式，而不是 seven days。类似表达还有 a ten-year-old boy 和 a three-hour trip。

× Travelling helped me to gain a deeper deeper understanding of other countries and city's unique cultural and historical heritage.

✓ Travelling helped me gain a deeper understanding of the unique cultural and historical heritage of other countries and cities.

原句中的 city's 是单数所有格，但前面提到的是 other countries and cities，因此应使用复数 cities。注意：单数所有格为 city’s，复数所有格为 cities’；如果改成 of other countries and cities，也可以避免所有格形式混乱。

× Travelling helped me to gain a deeper deeper understanding of other countries and city's unique cultural and historical heritage.

✓ Travelling helped me gain a deeper understanding of the unique cultural and historical heritage of other countries and cities.

unique 表示“独特的、特定的”，通常前面使用定冠词 the，因此说 the unique cultural and historical heritage。建议在 unique、same、only 等表示特定意义的词前注意使用 the。

× Travelling helped me to gain a deeper deeper understanding of other countries and city's unique cultural and historical heritage.

✓ Travelling helped me gain a deeper understanding of the unique cultural and historical heritage of other countries and cities.

deeper 被重复使用，形成错误表达。这里只需要使用一次 deeper。比较级通常用来表示程度变化，例如 gain a deeper understanding；不要重复写同一个比较级。