Travelling— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答切题，并且给出了原因，整体表达自然。不过，“Absolutely yes”不够地道，可以改为“Yes, definitely”。“at this time”在这里使用不自然，建议改为“during the journey”或直接删除。另外，第二句和第三句都在说明坐窗边的好处，可以加入更具体的细节，例如欣赏风景或在旅途中放松，以增强内容。

예시: Yes, definitely. I prefer a window seat because I can enjoy the scenery during the journey, especially when I’m travelling through the countryside. It also helps me relax and escape from the hustle and bustle of the city.

제안: 回答包含了时间、人物和交通方式，内容基本充分，但时态和名词形式需要改进。“brought me to other cities”建议改为“took me to other cities”；“When it was summer holiday or winter holidays we go”存在时态错误，应改为“When we had summer or winter holidays, we went...”或“When it was summer or winter vacation, we would travel...”。“other city”应为“other cities”，“by subways”应为“by subway”，“high speed rail”应写作“high-speed rail”。建议使用一个具体目的地或旅途细节，使答案更生动。

예시: Yes, I did. When I was in primary school, my parents often took me to other cities during the summer or winter holidays. We usually travelled by high-speed rail, and I especially enjoyed looking out of the window and chatting with my parents during the journey.

× When it was summer holiday or winter holidays we go.

✓ During the summer or winter holidays, we went.

“When”引导的是过去发生的经历，主句中的动词应使用一般过去时。原句使用了现在时“go”，应改为过去式“went”。此外，句首使用“During”比“When it was”更自然地表达“在暑假或寒假期间”。

× We went to other city by subways or high speed rail.

✓ We went to other cities by subway or high-speed rail.

“other city”中的“city”应使用复数“cities”，因为前文提到去了多个城市。“by subway”表示乘坐地铁这种交通方式时通常使用单数；“high-speed rail”也应作为固定交通方式表达，并使用连字符。