Travelling— Part 1 채점 보고서

연습Part12026-10-01 21:11:10

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Part 1

시험관

Do you prefer to sit by the window when travelling?

수험생

Yes I do I prefer sitting by the window because I enjoy watching the mountains, rivers and countryside pass by which makes me feel relaxed and peaceful.

시험관

Did you have a long journey with your family as a child?

수험생

No, I didn't I didn't have a long journey because my parents were swamped with their work. So we don't have enough time to travel.

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Part 1

Do you prefer to sit by the window when travelling?

점수: 88.0

제안: 回答内容直接,理由清楚,细节也比较具体。注意在“Yes, I do”后停顿或使用句号,并将长句拆分,以提高自然度和清晰度。还可以加入一个具体场景或结果,使回答更加生动。

예시: Yes, I do. I prefer sitting by the window because I enjoy watching the mountains, rivers, and countryside go by. The changing scenery helps me feel relaxed, especially on a long train journey.

Did you have a long journey with your family as a child?

점수: 76.0

제안: 回答了问题并给出了原因,但存在时态和表达问题:过去的经历应使用“we didn’t have enough time”,而不是“we don’t have enough time”。“No, I didn’t”后应使用句号或逗号,避免重复“I didn’t have a long journey”。此外,可以补充一个具体例子或说明你们通常如何度过假期,使内容更完整。

예시: No, I didn’t. My parents were usually busy with work, so we didn’t have much time to travel when I was young. We mostly took short day trips to places near our hometown during public holidays.

문법

5: Past tense issue(一般过去时错误)

× So we don't have enough time to travel.

✓ So we didn't have enough time to travel.

问题发生在过去(“as a child”),因此应使用一般过去时。将现在时“don't have”改为过去时“didn't have”,以保持与前文“didn't have”以及问题中的过去时间一致。建议:回答过去发生的事情时,注意把一般现在时的助动词“do/does”改为一般过去时的“did”,否定形式使用“didn't + 动词原形”。

중요 어휘

Long— Lengthy; Soon; Yearn for
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