Travelling— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your answer grammatical, concise and add one specific reason with a linking word. Use a topic sentence then one or two supporting details. Avoid tense errors and redundancy.

예시: Yes, I usually prefer to sit by the window when I travel because I enjoy watching the scenery pass by. For example, on a recent train trip I spent the whole hour looking at rolling hills and small villages, which made the journey more relaxing and interesting.

제안: Give a direct, clear answer about your childhood trips, use simple past for past events and include one specific example or frequency phrase. Keep sentences short and use linking words like 'when' or 'often'.

예시: Yes, I often had long journeys with my family when I was a child. For example, every summer we drove for eight hours to visit my grandparents, and those trips helped us become closer as a family.

× I prefer sit by the window and traveling because the window seat clearly view the outdoor activities and outdoor scenes.

✓ I prefer sitting by the window and traveling because the window seat clearly shows the outdoor activities and scenes.

The verb prefer requires the gerund form when followed by another verb (verb + -ing). 'Prefer sit' should be 'prefer sitting'. Also 'traveling' is correct as a gerund here. Additionally, 'view' is incorrect for the subject 'window seat' and needs a finite verb agreeing with it: use 'shows'. Use 'outdoor activities and scenes' to avoid repetition. Suggestion: use 'prefer + -ing' structure and ensure subject-verb agreement (window seat -> shows).

× That amazing landscape when I were traveling.

✓ That was an amazing landscape when I was traveling.

This sentence lacks a main verb and uses the wrong verb form. Use the past tense copula 'was' to describe a past experience: 'That was an amazing landscape.' Also 'I were' is incorrect for the singular first-person subject; the correct past tense is 'I was'. Suggestion: include the verb 'was' and use correct past tense 'was' for 'I'.

× Don't remember outside your memory but I adulting any younger my age I will going my family within a month our family together going to their many vacation for family relationship goods and family together.

✓ I don't remember outside of my memory, but when I was younger I used to go on many family vacations with my family to strengthen our relationships.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. Multiple issues: missing auxiliary 'do' in negative (I don't remember), incorrect preposition ('outside your memory' should be 'outside of my memory' or simply 'I don't remember'), incorrect verb forms ('adulting' is incorrect in this context; use 'when I was younger'), incorrect tense and verb forms ('will going' and 'going' are wrong; use 'used to go' or 'went'), and awkward phrase 'many vacation for family relationship goods' which should be 'many family vacations to strengthen our relationships'. Suggestion: reorganize the sentence into a clear subject + verb + object structure, use correct auxiliary verbs for negation, use past tense for past habits ('used to' or simple past), and replace unclear phrases with natural expressions like 'family vacations' and 'to strengthen our relationships'.