Travelling— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and directly responds to the question, but it has some grammatical errors and slight redundancy. Improve by using correct prepositions and pronouns, reduce repetition, and add one brief specific reason using a linking word. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I prefer to sit by the window when travelling because I enjoy the view. For example, I can watch forests, rivers and other vehicles pass by, which makes long trips more interesting. Also, sitting by the window lets me take photos and relax without disturbing others.

제안: The answer attempts to answer but has major grammar and coherence issues, and is repetitive. Improve by correcting tense and sentence structure, giving a clear short statement about the past, and adding a specific supporting detail or reason using a linking word. Limit to 2–3 concise sentences.

예시: No, I didn’t go on long journeys with my family when I was a child because we rarely travelled abroad. Instead, we usually stayed in our hometown and took short trips to nearby towns on holidays.

× Yes, I prefer to sit by the window because it's more fun than sitting someone else and when I sit by the window I can see so much forest and other cars.

✓ Yes, I prefer to sit by the window because it's more fun than sitting next to someone else, and when I sit by the window I can see many forests and other cars.

The original sentence misuses the pronoun phrase 'sitting someone else'; the correct expression is 'sitting next to someone else' (preposition + pronoun). Also 'so much forest' is unnatural; use 'many forests' or 'a lot of forest' depending on meaning. The sentence also needs a comma before 'and' to join independent clauses. Suggestion: use 'next to someone else' for seating comparisons and choose 'many forests' or 'a lot of forest' to match countability and the intended meaning. Grammar problem type ID: 12

× No, I don't have a long journey with my family when I was a child because we are not just traveling so much and in my life I am not being something about my country.

✓ No, I didn't have long journeys with my family when I was a child because we didn't travel much, and in my life I haven't been able to travel around my country.

The sentence mixes present and past tense incorrectly. For past experiences, use past simple ('didn't have', 'we didn't travel'). The second clause attempts to express a lifelong inability to travel, so use present perfect ('haven't been able') rather than 'I am not being something about my country' which is ungrammatical. Also 'a long journey' is better plural 'long journeys' if referring to repeated trips. Suggestion: keep tense consistent for past events and use appropriate verbs like 'travel' and 'been able to travel'. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× I just I have just being in my country.

✓ I have just been in my country.

The phrase 'have just being' is incorrect because 'being' is the present participle; after 'have' (present perfect) you need the past participle 'been'. Also the duplicated 'I' is redundant. Use 'I have just been in my country' to indicate recent experience. Suggestion: use 'have/has' + past participle (been) for present perfect verbs and avoid repeating subjects. Grammar problem type ID: 9}]} PMID:undefined)