Travelling— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答总体自然且相关，但可以更简洁、有条理并使用连接词来提高流畅度与逻辑性。注意时态和单复数（如“the city or the town I travelled”应为“I travel to”或“I visited”）。尽量将信息控制在最多5句内，首句直接回应并给出立场，随后用1–2句具体原因并用连接词如“because/so/for example”衔接。

예시: Yes, I usually prefer a window seat when travelling because I enjoy watching the changing scenery. For example, seeing old buildings and parks helps me recognise the character of a city. Also, looking out the window makes the journey feel more relaxed, so time seems to pass more slowly.

제안: 回答内容清楚且相关，但有时态和用词混用（例如“Now I didn't”应去掉Now或改为When I was a child, I didn’t）。句子可更紧凑并加入具体例子来增加细节，如提及一次短途旅行的地点或活动。使用连接词如“because/so/for example”使结构更连贯，控制在不超过5句。

예시: When I was a child, we didn’t go on many long trips because my parents preferred staying at home. For example, we only took a few short drives to nearby parks or relatives' houses. So most of my childhood memories are of staying local rather than travelling far.

× Yes I prefer to sit by the window when travelling I love the passing scenery when I look at the window.

✓ Yes, I prefer to sit by the window when travelling. I love the passing scenery when I look out of the window.

该句主要问题是动词和短语搭配不当以及句子缺少标点。"look at the window" 在此语境不符合英语习惯，正确应为 "look out of the window" 或 "look out the window"，表示向窗外看。并且原句缺少句间分隔，应把两个句子分开。建议：使用正确的动词短语搭配（look out of the window），并注意句子断句与标点。

× It helps me recognise the appearance of the city or the town I travelled.

✓ It helps me recognise the appearance of the city or town I travelled to.

句子中动词 'travelled' 需要带介词 'to' 才能与表示目的地的宾语连用。原句缺少介词导致结构不完整且不自然。建议：当用 'travel' 表示去某地并接地点时，使用 'travel to'；若不用 'to' 可改为过去分词短语如 'the city or town I travelled around'，需根据具体意思选择合适介词。

× Moreover, the time feels slow when I sit by the window.

✓ Moreover, time feels slower when I sit by the window.

原句中 'the time feels slow' 在比较意义或感受表达中更常用比较级 'slower' 来表示时间比平常感觉更慢；此外通常不用定冠词 'the'。因此改为 'time feels slower' 更自然。建议：表达感受比较时使用比较级，注意冠词的使用。

× Now I didn't have many long journeys with my family when I was a child because my parents are both homebodies and not very keen on going out.

✓ No, I didn't have many long journeys with my family when I was a child because my parents were both homebodies and not very keen on going out.

此句需要与提问的过去时间保持一致。回答应以否定回答开头 'No,' 而不是 'Now'（拼写或用词错误）。此外，句中时间为过去，应把 'are' 改为过去式 'were'。建议：注意回答开头的用词以及时态一致性（谈过去事件时主句动词用过去式）。

× They prefer staying at home so we only went on a few shorter trips

✓ They preferred staying at home, so we only went on a few short trips.

句子在描述过去习惯性行为时应使用过去式 'preferred' 而不是现在式 'prefer'，以保持时态一致性。另外 'shorter trips' 没有比较对象时改为 'short trips' 更自然。建议：叙述过去发生的事情时使用过去式；注意形容词比较级的使用需有比较参照。