Travelling— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ответ был понятен отчасти, но вы сделали много грамматических ошибок и выражений, которые сбивают смысл. Постарайтесь давать чёткий тематический ответ (Yes/No) и затем одно-два конкретных объяснения, используя правильную структуру предложений и связки (for example, because, however). Избегайте лишних слов и неправильной лексики; вместо «plate» или «Obsid» используйте «plane» и «often»/«usually». Также следите за порядком слов и формой глаголов (I prefer, I like). Практикуйте короткие связные предложения — не более 3–4 предложений в ответе.

예시: Yes, I usually prefer to sit by the window when I travel by plane because I like the view and it feels more private. For example, I can watch the landscape while we take off and land, and I often enjoy reading with natural light. However, if I want to get up often, I might choose an aisle seat instead.

제안: Ответ содержит основную идею, но есть грамматические и структурные ошибки (например, времена, артикли и порядок слов). Давайте формировать ответ с одной тематической фразой в начале, затем 1–2 подробности с примером и выводом. Используйте правильные времена (I went / we traveled) и конкретные детали (куда именно, что вы делали). Не оставляйте предложение незаконченным — завершайте мысль.

예시: Yes, I often went on long trips with my parents when I was a child. We usually traveled within my country, for example to the mountains, where we hiked, had picnics, and stayed in small guesthouses. Those trips helped me appreciate nature and created good memories.

× I think if you in a plate yes I prefer it by the window for example, Obsid traveling not I prefer walk and travel to cities.

✓ I think if you are on a plane, yes, I prefer to sit by the window. For example, I don't like long-distance traveling; I prefer walking and visiting cities.

The sentence has multiple sentence structure problems: missing verb 'are', incorrect preposition 'in a plate' instead of 'on a plane', run-on sentence and unclear clauses. Also 'Obsid' seems to be a typo and 'not I prefer walk and travel to cities' is ungrammatical. Suggestions: split into clear sentences, use 'are' after 'if you', use 'on a plane', use 'prefer to sit' and 'I prefer walking and visiting cities' or 'I prefer to walk and travel to cities' for clarity.

× Yes, I have been along travel with my parents when I was a child but not overseas we traveled in our country for example to mountain or

✓ Yes, I took a long trip with my parents when I was a child, but not overseas; we traveled within our country, for example to the mountains.

The original mixes present perfect 'have been' with incorrect phrase 'along travel' and missing plural 'mountains'. Use simple past 'took' because a specific past time 'when I was a child' is mentioned. Use 'within our country' instead of 'in our country' for naturalness and plural 'mountains'. Suggestions: use simple past for completed past events, use correct collocations like 'took a long trip' and plural nouns where needed.