Travelling— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 总体表达清晰，直接回答了问题并给出两个理由，但存在语法错误、重复和冗长的问题。建议： 1) 改正语法，如 use of infinitive 和复数形式（enjoy to sit → enjoy sitting；window(s) 单复数一致）。 2) 减少重复与冗余，尽量用一到两句话表达两个要点。使用连接词使逻辑更顺畅（e.g. because / and / moreover / whereas）。 3) 增加具体细节或例子来丰富回答，但保持不超过5句。

예시: Yes, I prefer sitting by the window because I can enjoy the beautiful scenery outside and it’s usually quieter than the aisle, so I can relax or take a nap. For example, on my last train trip I watched rolling hills and felt much more comfortable sitting by the window.

제안: 回答直接且有画面感，但存在时态错误、用词重复和拼写/词序问题。建议： 1) 注意时态一致（描述过去经历应使用过去时：we were there / we appreciated / we enjoyed）。 2) 避免重复（spectacular spectacular），并改进形容词搭配（crystal-like Mediterranean Sea 而非 oceans）。 3) 可以加入一两句具体细节（如和谁去、做了什么）以增加内容但不要超出5句。

예시: Yes, I went to Santorini with my family when I was a child. We were amazed by the picturesque white‑washed houses and the crystal‑clear Mediterranean Sea, and we often watched spectacular sunsets from the cliffside.

× Of course, I enjoy to sit by the windows when travelling because it offers me great convenience to enjoy the beautiful scenery outside the window and what's more compared to the seat by the corridor, it is more quiet so I can take a nap.

✓ Of course, I enjoy sitting by the window when travelling because it offers me great convenience to enjoy the beautiful scenery outside, and what's more, compared to the seat by the corridor, it is quieter so I can take a nap.

错误类型：动词+ -ing（Gerund）使用错误。动词 enjoy 后应接动名词（-ing），而不是不定式 to sit；此外，windows（复数）在此情境中应使用单数 the window（指飞机/火车等座位旁的窗户）；outside the window 可简化为 outside；more quiet 应为比较级 quieter。建议：记住 enjoy、avoid、mind 等动词后接动名词；在比较级表达时使用 -er 或 more + 形容词（取决于词长）。

× Of course I took a journey with my family to Santorini Island in Greece as a child.

✓ Of course, I took a journey with my family to Santorini in Greece when I was a child.

错误类型：时态/表达方式不够自然。原句时态（过去时）大体正确，但短语顺序和时间状语更自然的表达是 'when I was a child'；地名后常省略 'Island' 或放在名称后但 Santorini 本身常用，不必加 Island。建议：将时间状语放句末并使用更自然的说法。

× When we are there we appreciate the picturesque white washed houses and crystal like Mediterranean oceans.

✓ When we were there, we appreciated the picturesque white-washed houses and the crystal-like Mediterranean sea.

错误类型：现在时与过去描述不一致。句子在讲过去的旅行，应该用过去时 were/appreciated 而不是 are/appreciate；white washed 应连字符或写作 white-washed；Mediterranean oceans 表达不自然，通常用 the Mediterranean sea（或 sea 的单数）并加上形容词连字符。建议：叙述过去经历时全句使用过去时，并注意形容词复合词的连字符与单复数习惯用法。

× What's more, we also enjoyed spectacular spectacular sunsets.

✓ What's more, we also enjoyed spectacular sunsets.

错误类型：形容词使用错误（重复）。原句将 spectacular 重复了两次，属于笔误或多余重复，应删除多余的一个 spectacular。建议：写句子后检查重复词，确保形容词只出现一次并位置正确。