Travelling— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes, I prefer window seats), then give 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar (tense, articles, prepositions) and avoid redundancy. Aim for 2–4 sentences total.

예시: Yes, I prefer to sit by the window when I travel. I enjoy looking outside because I can see mountains, trees and villages passing by, which makes the journey relaxing. Also, I like taking photos of the scenery, so a window seat is ideal for me.

제안: Answer directly and use past tense for childhood memories. Begin with a clear topic sentence (Yes, I often had long journeys with my family), then give 1–2 specific examples and a reason or feeling, linked with words like "because" or "for example." Keep it concise and grammatically correct.

예시: Yes, I often took long journeys with my family when I was a child. My father’s job required him to travel between states, so we frequently visited my hometown and relatives; these trips taught me about different places and gave me many happy memories.

× Yes, I was very happy to sitting around windows because I am happy and also I watched do outside and see the mountains trees and many hilly areas and peoples around to going to back, move other places, which is Merry is too good for me.

✓ Yes, I was very happy to sit by the window because I enjoyed looking outside and seeing the mountains, trees, and many hilly areas and people moving around as we traveled, which was very enjoyable for me.

Multiple errors fit the 'Verb + -ing form' rule: 'to sitting' is incorrect because after 'happy to' the base form (infinitive) 'sit' should be used rather than the -ing form. Also 'watched do outside' and 'see' need correct verb forms and parallel structure: use 'enjoyed looking' (verb + -ing after 'enjoy') or 'enjoyed to look' is incorrect; here 'enjoyed looking' is natural. Use 'seeing' for parallelism with 'looking'. Other corrections included choosing singular 'window' to match 'sit by the window', removing redundant words, correcting 'peoples' to 'people' (plural noun), and rephrasing 'to going to back, move other places' to 'as we traveled' for clarity. Suggestion: after verbs like 'happy to' use the base infinitive ('to sit'), after verbs like 'enjoy' use the -ing form ('enjoyed looking'), and keep parallel forms when listing actions.

× Yeah, I have lots of memories when I was a child because my father has a job which is travelling to other state to other states and I have lots of memories that time I go to my hometown and my other father houses which give me lots of experience and lots of things.

✓ Yes, I have many memories from my childhood because my father had a job that involved traveling to other states, and I have many memories from that time when I went to my hometown and visited my father's other houses, which gave me a lot of experience.

This sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. The student uses present perfect/present ('have') and present ('has','go') where past forms are required to describe past events. Use past tense 'had' for the father's job, 'involved traveling' for the job's action in the past, and 'went' and 'visited' for actions that happened during childhood. Also corrected 'other state to other states' to 'other states', 'lots' to 'many' or 'a lot' for style, 'my other father houses' to 'my father's other houses', and 'give' to past 'gave'. Suggestion: keep consistent past tense when describing past events; use past simple for completed actions.