Travelling— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms and prepositions, and avoid unnecessary words. Add one specific reason with a linking word. For example, say you enjoy the view and mention a specific detail (landscapes, sunsets) to make the answer richer. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, I prefer to sit by the window when I travel. I enjoy looking at the changing scenery, especially landscapes and sunsets, so sitting by the window makes the journey more interesting.

제안: Use past tense consistently and give one or two specific details. Begin with a direct topic sentence, then add when and where, and mention a memorable moment. Avoid filler words like 'umm' and incomplete sentences. Keep answer within 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, I did. When I graduated from elementary school, my family and I went on a package trip to Europe, and I remember visiting several historic cities, which was exciting and memorable.

× Yes, of course I totally liked sitting by the window 'cause when I sitting near window I can see the environment where I passed away. So it is very interesting.

✓ Yes, of course I totally like sitting by the window because when I sit near the window I can see the surroundings I am passing. So it is very interesting.

Errors: use of past tense 'liked' conflicts with habitual preference (present simple needed) -> change to 'like' (Present tense issue, ID 6). 'when I sitting' is missing auxiliary/incorrect form; correct is 'when I sit' (Verb + -ing form issue, ID 8). Missing article before 'window' -> 'the window' (Article errors, ID 22). Awkward phrase 'environment where I passed away' is incorrect meaning and grammar; likely intended 'surroundings I am passing' or 'the scenery I pass by' (Sentence structure/word choice). Suggestions: use present simple for regular preferences; after 'when' use base verb for general time clauses; include 'the' before specific noun 'window'; replace 'passed away' which means 'died' with 'passing' or 'pass by' to describe scenery. Suggested corrected sentence: 'Yes, of course I totally like sitting by the window because when I sit near the window I can see the surroundings I am passing, so it is very interesting.'

× Yes, of course. Umm, when I graduating elementary school, I go a package trip with my family. Umm that traveling was go to Europe and I.

✓ Yes, of course. Umm, when I graduated from elementary school, I went on a package trip with my family. That trip was to Europe and I...

Errors: 'when I graduating' uses present participle where past simple is required for a completed past event -> 'when I graduated' (Past tense issue, ID 5). Missing preposition 'from' after 'graduated' (Incorrect use of prepositions, ID 11). 'I go a package trip' uses wrong verb and article; correct is 'I went on a package trip' (Past tense issue ID 5 and Incorrect use of prepositions ID 11; also Article errors ID 22). 'that traveling was go to Europe and I' is ungrammatical: use 'That trip was to Europe' and finish the sentence (Sentence structure errors, ID 26). Suggestions: for past events use past simple for main verbs; use 'graduate from' to indicate finishing a level; use 'go on a trip' and past 'went' for completed trips; use 'trip' not 'traveling' in this context; ensure sentence is completed with a full clause.