Travelling— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your answer more concise, correct grammar, and add a brief reason with a linking word. Avoid repetition (saying you prefer the window multiple times). Use correct prepositions and articles.

예시: Yes, I prefer to sit by the window when I travel because I enjoy the views and it feels more private. For example, on flights I like watching the landscape during takeoff, and on buses I can relax and look out at the countryside.

제안: Improve grammar (plural/singular, past tense), use clearer sentence structure with a topic sentence and supporting details linked by connectors. Give one or two specific examples and correct place names and phrasing. Keep response within 3–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I often went on long journeys with my family when I was a child. For instance, we visited places such as Cox's Bazar and Sylhet from our home in Gendha, and the trips usually lasted several days. I enjoyed them because we explored new places and spent quality time together.

× Yes, I always prefer to sit by the window when I am travelling somewhere.

✓ Yes, I always prefer to sit by the window when I am traveling somewhere.

The original sentence uses British spelling 'travelling' which is acceptable, but ensure consistency with 'traveling' or 'travelling' depending on chosen variant. No grammatical error otherwise; change is optional for consistency.

× It's like a by bus or car or by plane whenever I travel I usually prefer to take a seat by the window.

✓ I like to travel by bus, by car, or by plane; whenever I travel, I usually prefer to sit by the window.

Errors: unnecessary 'a' before modes of transport and run-on sentence. Use preposition 'by' without the article for transport modes (article error/incorrect article usage) and add commas or a semicolon to separate independent clauses. Also replace 'take a seat' with 'sit' for natural phrasing.

× Yes, I had many long journey with my family when I was a kid, my parents took me to travel or we visited more places like Coxbazar, Shunderborne, Silet from Geneda, we travel a lot and we are very enjoyed.

✓ Yes, I had many long journeys with my family when I was a kid. My parents took me traveling; we visited places like Cox's Bazar, Sundarbans, and Sylhet from Geneva. We traveled a lot and enjoyed it very much.

Multiple errors fixed: 'journey' should be plural 'journeys' (singular/plural issue). Sentence run-on and tense inconsistency: use past tense 'traveled' and 'enjoyed' to match 'had' and 'took'. Proper nouns corrected and prepositions adjusted. Split into shorter sentences for clarity and correct word order.