Travelling— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答自然且表达了理由，但有语法错误与冗余，可更简洁流畅。注意时态与人称一致（例如：'when I travel'），将重复表达（'I really like'）替换为同义但更丰富的词汇，用连词连接句子使逻辑更清晰。可以加入一两句具体例子说明为什么这些景色让你放松。

예시: Yes, I prefer a window seat when I travel, especially on planes, because I enjoy watching the sunrise, sunset and the shapes of clouds. For instance, once I watched a sunrise from above the clouds and felt calm and inspired, which helped me relax during a long flight.

제안: 内容回答直接，但语法错误较多且信息不够具体。注意主谓一致（'my parents were' 或 'my parents are' depending），避免口语缩写（'cause' → 'because'），并可补充具体例子如一次短途旅行的目的地或经历。使用连接词（because, so, therefore）使句子更连贯。

예시: No, I didn’t have many long journeys as a child because my parents were very busy with work. We usually took short trips, such as weekend visits to my grandparents’ village, where we would play in the fields and help with simple chores.

× Yes, I really like to sit by the window when I traveling, especially on the plane.

✓ Yes, I really like to sit by the window when I travel, especially on the plane.

错误类型：现在时态（动词形式）错误。 解释：在英语中，when 后面表示习惯或一般情况时应该用一般现在时，动词不加 -ing。原句中的 traveling 是现在分词，不符合习惯性或一般时态的表达。建议：将 traveling 改为动词原形 travel，使用一般现在时来表示习惯性动作。

× I really like to see the views out of the window like the sunrise, sunset and clouds that make me feel more relaxed and enjoyable.

✓ I really like to see the views out of the window, such as the sunrise, sunset and clouds, which make me feel more relaxed and happy.

错误类型：形容词/副词使用不当。 解释：原句用 enjoyable 描述人的感受不太恰当，enjoyable 通常用来描述事物令人愉快，而人更常用形容词 happy 或 pleased 描述感觉。同时 like ... like 用法重复且列举项前应使用 such as 更自然；从句连接应使用 which 指代前面的景色。建议：用 such as 列举，用 which 引导定语从句，并把 enjoyable 改为 happy（或 relaxed），使表达更自然。

× Well, I didn't go on a long journey as a child 'cause I'm not such an energetic person and my parents is also really busy with their work, so they sometimes take me to some short journey or go to my grandparents home.

✓ Well, I didn't go on long journeys as a child because I wasn't such an energetic person and my parents were also really busy with their work, so they sometimes took me on short trips or went to my grandparents' home.

错误类型：过去时态及主谓一致等问题。 解释：1) 句子整体讲过去的情况，应使用过去时：wasn't、were、took、went。原句部分动词用现在时（I'm, is, take, go），时态不一致。2) parents 是复数，后接动词应为 were 而不是 is（主谓一致问题）。3) 短途旅行应使用短语 short trips 或 short journeys，且介词搭配为 go on a trip/take someone on a trip；去祖父母家应为 go to my grandparents' home，所有格需加撇号。建议：将相关动词改为过去式，修正复数主谓一致，调整短语和所有格形式。