Travelling— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答不够连贯且包含语法和用词错误。建议：1) 开头用一句明确的主题句回答问题（例如：Yes, I prefer to sit by the window when I travel.）。2) 使用一到两句补充细节并用连接词（for example / because / so）使句子连贯（例如说明原因或举例）。3) 注意时态和单词形式，避免无意义词汇或重复。4) 控制长度在3-4句内，保持自然口语。

예시: Yes, I prefer to sit by the window when I travel because I enjoy the view and find it relaxing. For example, on train trips I like to watch the countryside pass by, which helps me feel calm. Also, I can take photos easily from the window, so it makes the journey more enjoyable.

제안: 你的回答太短且语法错误严重，信息不足。建议：1) 先用完整句子直接回答（Yes/No），然后用一到两句具体说明原因或举例。2) 使用正确的时态和主谓一致（例如：When I was a child, I didn’t have any long journeys with my family.）。3) 可加入时间或地点细节以增强内容（比如 how often, where, or why）。4) 保持连贯，使用连接词（because / so / therefore）。

예시: No, when I was a child I didn't have any long journeys with my family because we rarely had time or money for vacations. Instead, we usually took short day trips to nearby parks, which were fun but not very long.

× Yes, I like cold start by the window when I travel.

✓ Yes, I like to start by the window when I travel.

原句中“cold start”结构不合适，似乎想表达“喜欢坐在窗边开始旅行/喜欢坐在窗边”。“cold”是形容词与此处语义不符，应去掉并使用不定式“to start”或更自然的表达“to sit”。建议：使用不定式表达偏好，如“I like to sit by the window when I travel.”

× I like. Looking the windows. Serious.

✓ I like looking at the window. It's relaxing.

原句中断句且动词形式与介词使用错误。“Looking the windows”缺少正确的介词，应为“looking at the window(s)”。此外单词“Serious”与语境不符，猜测想说“relaxing”或“it’s peaceful”等。建议：把短句合并为完整句并用正确介词："I like looking at the window." 若要表达感受，用“It’s relaxing.”或“It makes me feel relaxed.”

× No, when I was child.

✓ No, when I was a child.

缺少不定冠词“a”。在表示某人“还是孩子的时候”应使用“a child”。这是句子结构/冠词错误，需补上冠词以构成完整正确短语。建议：使用“when I was a child”。

× I'm not have a long joy with my family.

✓ I didn't have a long journey with my family.

原句中“I'm not have”是不正确的动词形式组合。表达过去否定应使用过去时态“did not + 动词原形”。此外“joy”应为“journey”。因此改为“I didn't have a long journey with my family.” 建议：过去事件用过去时，否定用“didn't + 動詞原形”。

× Jury is.

✓ It wasn't.

“Jury is.”无意义且拼写错误，可能想说“Sorry”或“It wasn't.” 根据上下文应为对之前否定的补充（例如“没有”），用“It wasn't.”或“I'm not sure.” 若想表达对话中的停顿或确认，应使用完整句子。建议：使用完整句子并避免拼写错误。