Travelling— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 在回答中要直接回应问题并给出清晰的理由，避免语法错误和不连贯的表达。你的答案语法错误较多，句子混乱且含义不明确，例如“window is so early to break”“see far away the windows”不符合英语表达。建议用一到两句主题句直接回答，然后用一到两句具体原因或例子支持，使用连接词（because, so, however）使逻辑更清楚。

예시: I usually don't prefer to sit by the window when travelling because I feel anxious about heights and sometimes the view makes me feel dizzy. For example, on long flights I choose an aisle seat so I can get up easily and feel less confined.

제안: 回答应准确反映时间和事实，避免明显错误（例如把儿童时期说成三十岁）。结构上先给出简短肯定句，然后用一到两句具体细节支持记忆点。尽量使用连接词（when, because, and）并提供具体例子（目的地、活动或感受）来丰富内容。

예시: Yes, I did. When I was a child my family took a long trip to the countryside for two weeks, and I still remember visiting farms and hiking in the hills. It was memorable because we spent a lot of time together and I learned how to ride a horse.

× No, I don't think so because I think when you see by the window is so dangerous maybe the window is so early to break. so I think I will see far away the windows.

✓ No, I don't think so because I think sitting by the window is dangerous — the window might break easily. So I prefer to sit away from the windows.

问题属于介词和短语搭配错误（Incorrect use of prepositions）。原句中“see by the window”用法不当，意思不清；应使用固定搭配“sit by the window”（靠窗坐）。另外“so early to break”是不自然的表达，正确说法是“might break easily”或“is likely to break”。最后“see far away the windows”语序和动词搭配错误，想表达“坐得远离窗户”应说“sit away from the windows”或“sit away from the window(s)”。建议：学习常用动词短语（sit by/ sit away from/ break easily），注意介词搭配和自然表达。

× Yes, when I was thirty years old I went to the Europe with my parents I think it's long time ago and but I still remember many things of this travel

✓ Yes, when I was thirty years old I went to Europe with my parents. I think it was a long time ago, but I still remember many things from that trip.

问题属于过去时使用和时态表达不自然（Past tense issue）。原句中“went to the Europe”中不需要定冠词“the”，应为“went to Europe”。另外句子缺乏合适的时态和标点，原文“I think it's long time ago and but”混用了现在时和过去时且有重复连词，应改为过去时表达事件时间“it was a long time ago”，并用“but I still remember many things from that trip”来表达仍然记得的事实。建议：复习过去时一般用法和常见固定搭配（go to Europe, remember something from a trip），注意句子连接与标点。