Travelling— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is understandable but has many hesitations, repetition and unclear phrases. To improve: 1) Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question. 2) Use one or two supporting reasons with specific details. 3) Minimise filler words (uh, um) and repetitions. 4) Use linking words (for example, because, so) to make the response coherent. Aim for 2–3 sentences, natural vocabulary (relaxed, enjoy the view, prefer aisle/window) and correct grammar (I pay extra to sit by the window).

예시: Yes, I usually pay extra to sit by the window when I travel. I enjoy looking out at the scenery because it helps me relax and makes the journey more interesting.

제안: The answer is very short, full of hesitations and unclear chronology. To improve: 1) Give a direct yes/no answer with a clear time reference (as a child). 2) Provide one or two specific details (where you went, how often, how you felt) and use linking words (for example, when, so, because). 3) Keep sentences concise and avoid repetition. 4) Use correct past tense for childhood experiences (we often took long trips; we went to the countryside).

예시: Yes, I often went on long journeys with my family when I was a child. For example, we used to drive to the countryside every summer, and I loved those trips because we spent a lot of time exploring nature and talking together.

× Yes, obviously I always pay for uh sitting, uh, sitting by the windows because uh, when do, when I, uh, when those insight into window inside sitting indoors, uh, I, I feel relaxed and I I.

✓ Yes, obviously I always pay to sit by the window because when I sit inside by the window I feel relaxed.

This sentence has multiple problems (fragmentation, incorrect verb forms, and awkward word order) that fit 'Sentence structure errors' (ID 26). 'Pay for sitting' is awkward; English uses 'pay to sit' or 'pay for a window seat.' 'By the windows' should be singular 'by the window' to match meaning. The phrase 'when do, when I... those insight into window inside sitting indoors' is ungrammatical and unclear; it should be simplified to 'when I sit inside by the window.' Remove filler words and repeated words ('uh', 'I I') to make a clear, grammatically correct sentence. Suggestion: practice forming a single independent clause with subject + verb + object and use concise phrases for reasons (e.g., 'because I feel relaxed').

× Yes, obviously I Los I always try to going with my family a long journey.

✓ Yes, obviously I always tried to go on long journeys with my family when I was a child.

This fragment contains past tense and verb form errors that fall under 'Past tense issue' (ID 5) and 'Verb + -ing form' misuse (ID 8), but primarily it's a sentence structure and tense error (ID 26). 'I always try to going' mixes present 'try' with gerund 'going' incorrectly; after 'try to' use the base form: 'try to go.' Because the question asks about childhood, use past tense: 'tried to go.' 'A long journey' should be plural 'long journeys' or specified as 'on a long journey'; 'going with my family' is redundant—use 'go on long journeys with my family.' Remove filler 'Los' and ensure consistent tense. Suggestion: identify the time reference (childhood) and use past tense; use 'try to' + base verb or 'tried to' + base verb for past habitual actions.

× If you just ego I was I was I was going my family going with my family and.

✓ For example, I used to go on long trips with my family.

This utterance is highly fragmented and repetitive, a 'Sentence structure error' (ID 26). 'If you just ego' is unintelligible filler and should be removed. Repeated 'I was I was I was going' indicates an attempt to express a past habitual action; the correct concise form is 'I used to go' or 'I would go.' 'Going my family going with my family and' repeats phrases and lacks proper prepositions: use 'go on trips with my family.' Suggestion: replace fillers with a clear time expression and use 'used to' for habitual past actions; practice producing one complete clause at a time.