Travelling— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh), correct grammar (use present simple or continuous consistently), and add one specific supporting detail with a linking word. Aim for 2–3 sentences, and use precise vocabulary (e.g., "scenery" instead of "imagine").

예시: Yes, I usually prefer a window seat when I travel. For example, I like looking at the changing scenery because it helps me spot interesting towns and landscapes, and it makes the journey more relaxing.

제안: Answer directly in the past tense and correct grammar. Use a clear topic sentence (e.g., "No, I didn't have many long journeys as a child.") then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words (e.g., "instead," "however"). Avoid repetition and keep it within 2–3 sentences.

예시: No, I didn't go on many long trips with my family when I was a child. Instead, we often took short drives to nearby parks or relatives' homes, which I enjoyed because I got to spend time with my siblings and parents.

× Yes, I always would like to, uh, sit by the window when I, uh, traveling around.

✓ Yes, I would always like to sit by the window when I travel around.

The original sentence uses 'traveling' without the auxiliary 'am' or appropriate tense; here the meaning is habitual preference, so the simple present 'travel' is correct. Also repositioned 'always' to natural placement and removed unnecessary filler. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual actions (I travel) and place adverbs like 'always' before the main verb (I would always like / I always like).

× It's it's give me the chance to explore the more places and enjoy, uh, enjoy the imagine by the window.

✓ It gives me the chance to explore more places and enjoy the view from the window.

Errors: duplicated 'It's', wrong verb form 'give' (should be 'gives' for third-person singular), incorrect use of 'the more places' (use 'more places' without 'the'), and 'imagine' used incorrectly instead of 'view'. Correct with subject-verb agreement 'It gives' and proper noun choices. Suggestion: choose correct noun ('view') and remove unnecessary articles ('more places').

× Actually, I don't have a have a long journey with my family when I was a child and I usually travel with the short distance with my brothers and father and mothers.

✓ Actually, I didn't have any long journeys with my family when I was a child, and I usually traveled short distances with my brothers and my parents.

Mixed tenses: the sentence refers to past experiences, so use past tense 'didn't have' and 'traveled'. Pluralization: 'journey' should be plural 'journeys' or 'any long journeys'; 'short distance' should be plural 'short distances'. Also 'father and mothers' is incorrect; use 'parents'. Suggestion: keep past tense consistent for past experiences and use correct plural forms and collective noun 'parents'.

× It was so great for me.

✓ Those trips were great for me.

The original 'It was so great for me' is vague about reference. In context, 'Those trips' clearly refers to the journeys mentioned; use plural 'trips' and past 'were' to match. Suggestion: refer clearly to the noun (trips/journeys) and match number and tense (were for plural past).