Travelling— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: You did not answer this question. Always provide a direct response (topic sentence) to the examiner’s question, then add 1–2 supporting details or a brief reason. Keep answers natural, avoid one-word replies, and limit to up to 5 sentences. Use linking words (for example, “because” or “so”) to make your reply coherent.

예시: Yes, I usually prefer to sit by the window when I travel because I enjoy looking at the scenery and it helps me relax. For instance, on long bus trips I like watching the countryside go by, which makes the journey feel shorter. Also, I find the window seat gives me more privacy and a place to rest my head if I want to nap.

제안: Your answer is too short and lacks supporting detail. Begin with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then add specific details (when, where, who was there, what made it memorable) and link them with words like “because” or “for example.” Keep it concise (1–4 additional sentences) and use varied vocabulary to show range.

예시: Yes, I had a long journey with my family when I was about eight years old. We drove for ten hours to visit my grandparents in a different province, and I remember playing car games and looking at maps to pass the time. Because we stopped at several small towns, I still recall the food we tried and the beautiful views along the way.

× Yes.

✓ Yes, I did.

The student's reply 'Yes.' is a short answer missing the verb that matches the examiner's past tense question 'Did you have a long journey with your family as a child?' A complete short answer in English to a past simple yes/no question requires the auxiliary verb 'did' and a pronoun if needed. Use 'Yes, I did.' for a full, grammatically complete response. Suggestion: respond with 'Yes, I did.' or give a full sentence such as 'Yes, I did; we often took long journeys when I was a child.'