Travelling— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答意思明确，但有语法错误和用词不准确的问题，句子也稍显重复。建议：1) 注意时态一致，例如一般喜欢用现在时（I always sit by the window when I travel）。2) 改进介词和搭配（sit by the window / next to the window，而非 "at the window" 或 "besides windows"）。3) 合并句子以避免重复，并用连接词使表达更流畅（e.g. because, so）。4) 控制在最多5句内并提供一两条具体原因或细节来丰富答案。

예시: Yes, I always prefer to sit by the window when I travel because I enjoy the view and it helps me relax. For example, on trains I like watching the countryside pass by, and on planes I enjoy seeing the clouds.

제안: 回答包含关键信息，但存在多处语法和表述问题，细节不够具体。建议：1) 用正确的时态和结构（I grew up in Changshun, which is in the northeast of China）。2) 用更自然的短语描述经历（we went on a long trip to Beijing）。3) 加入具体细节（如旅行时长、印象最深的活动或景点）以增加内容的丰富度。4) 使用连接词使句子连贯（for example, because, and）。

예시: Yes. I grew up in Changshun, which is in the northeast of China. When I was a child my parents took me on a long trip to Beijing, which lasted about a week. I remember visiting the Forbidden City and tasting local snacks, and the whole family enjoyed exploring the city together.

× Definitely, I always sit at the window when I was on the train or plane.

✓ Definitely, I always sit at the window when I am on the train or plane.

句子中时间状语“always”表示习惯动作，应使用一般现在时而不是过去时“was”。建议将“was”改为“am”，与主语“I”保持现在时一致，正确表达经常性的习惯行为。

× I usually choose the seat besides windows.

✓ I usually choose the seat beside the window.

“besides”是副词/介词短语(此外)，与位置含义不符。表示在窗边应使用介词短语“beside the window”或“by the window”。另外“windows”为复数但句中指特定的“窗”位置，改为单数“the window”更自然。建议使用“beside the window”或更常见的“by the window”。

× Yes, I grown up in Changshun, where is northeast of China.

✓ Yes, I grew up in Changshun, which is in the northeast of China.

“grown up”是过去分词，需与助动词连用（如have grown up）或改为一般过去时“grew up”表示过去发生的成长过程。句中还存在从句连接问题，应使用关系代词“which”并加介词短语“in the northeast of China”来表示位置。建议使用“grew up”和“which is in the northeast of China”。

× When I was a child, my parents took me to Beijing and we had a really great travel.

✓ When I was a child, my parents took me to Beijing and we had a really great trip.

短语“had a really great travel”结构不自然，英语中通常用“trip”表示旅行名词。此句其他部分为过去时，保持一致使用过去时态“took... and we had...”。建议把“travel”改为“trip”以符合自然表达。