Travelling— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn rõ ràng nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và thiếu cụ thể. Bạn nên: 1) Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề ngắn gọn, trực tiếp trả lời "Yes" hoặc "No"; 2) Sửa lỗi từ vựng/giới từ (ví dụ: "landscape outside", "seeing mountains and many more"); 3) Cung cấp mô tả cụ thể hơn (ví dụ loại cảnh quan bạn thích) và dùng liên từ để câu mạch lạc; 4) Giữ độ dài tối đa 3–4 câu, tránh lặp từ như "really" và "I love" quá nhiều.

예시: Yes, I prefer to sit by the window when travelling because I enjoy watching the scenery. For example, on long trips I like to see mountains, rivers and small villages passing by, which helps me relax. Also, sitting by the window lets me take photos and notice small details that I would otherwise miss.

제안: Bạn trả lời trực tiếp và cung cấp ví dụ, nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp, từ vựng và cụ thể hóa chi tiết. Hãy: 1) Mở đầu bằng một câu chủ đề đầy đủ; 2) Sửa lỗi số nhiều/đếm được ("long trip" → "long trips", "relative" → "relatives"); 3) Thêm thông tin cụ thể (đi đâu, mất bao lâu, cảm xúc hoặc một kỷ niệm ngắn) để câu trả lời sinh động hơn; 4) Sử dụng liên từ để nối ý rõ ràng.

예시: Yes, we often had long family journeys when I was a child. For instance, we used to drive for six hours to visit my grandparents in a neighboring city, and I remember playing games in the backseat to pass the time. Those trips were special because they brought the whole family together and created many happy memories.

× Well to be honest I really like sitting by the window when traveling because I love watching the landscape in outside.

✓ Well, to be honest, I really like sitting by the window when traveling because I love watching the landscape outside.

Error: unnecessary preposition 'in' before 'outside' and missing commas. Suggestion: remove 'in' and add commas after introductory phrase 'Well' and 'to be honest' for clarity. The gerund 'sitting' and 'watching' are correct here.

× For example on long trips I find seeing mountain and many are.

✓ For example, on long trips I enjoy seeing mountains and many other sights.

Error: 'mountain' should be plural 'mountains' to match 'seeing' generally, and phrase 'and many are' is ungrammatical. Suggestion: use 'many other sights' or list specific things. Also add comma after introductory phrase.

× Did you have a long journey with your family as a child? Student: Absolutely. When I was young, my family often went on long trip.

✓ When I was young, my family often went on long trips.

Error: 'trip' should be plural 'trips' to agree with 'often' indicating repeated events. Use past tense 'went' is correct. Also add 'on' before 'long trips' is optional if using 'went on long trips'.

× For example, sometime my family went to visit relative in another city.

✓ For example, sometimes my family went to visit relatives in another city.

Error: 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' (adverb of frequency) and 'relative' should be plural 'relatives' when unspecified plural. Also add commas and correct preposition 'in another city' is acceptable.

× We usually travel by car.

✓ We usually traveled by car.

Context: question asked about childhood journeys, so past tense is required. Change present 'travel' to past 'traveled' to match timeframe. If speaking generally about now, keep 'travel'.