Travelling— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 用词和语法要准确，同时保持简洁自然。你这句有语法错误（enjoying → enjoy），并且可以用一两句补充更具体的细节来丰富回答，例如说明喜欢什么类型的风景或为何喜欢，这样更符合评分标准。注意把句子限制在最多5句内，使用连接词（like, because, for example）来增强连贯性。

예시: Yes, I prefer to sit by the window when travelling because I enjoy watching the scenery. For example, I love seeing mountains and rivers pass by, which helps me relax during the trip.

제안: 回答要注意语法和词形（journey → journeys, remote relatives 可更具体）。可以在主题句后用一两句补充具体例子或频率来丰富内容，并用连接词衔接因果关系。保持自然流畅，避免过度重复。

예시: Yes, I often took long journeys with my family when I was a child because we visited relatives who lived far away. For instance, we used to drive for several hours to reach their village during summer holidays.

× Yes, I really enjoying sitting by the window when traveling because I like looking out the window and watching the incredible scenery.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy sitting by the window when traveling because I like looking out the window and watching the incredible scenery.

错误类型：动词后加 -ing 形式不当。句中主语 I 后应使用一般现在时的动词形式 enjoy（I enjoy），而不是现在分词 enjoying。建议：主语为 I 且表示常态或习惯时使用一般现在时动词（do/does + 动词原形或直接用动词原形），把 enjoying 改为 enjoy。

× Yes, when I was a child, I always had long journey with my family because we had to visit our remote relatives.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I always had long journeys with my family because we had to visit our remote relatives.

错误类型：单复数问题。名词 journey 在此处表示经常性的多次旅行，应使用复数 journeys。句中有副词 always 表示习惯性动作，需与复数名词搭配。建议：将 journey 改为 journeys。