Travelling— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答要更简洁连贯，避免重复和填充词（如 uh, I will）。先给出主题句，然后用一两句具体理由或例子支持。注意语法：使用正确时态和完整句子。可以用连接词（because, so）使句子更流畅。

예시: Yes, I always look out the window when I travel by bus or car because watching the scenery makes me feel relaxed and free. For example, I often enjoy seeing passing fields and small towns, which helps me unwind during long trips.

제안: 避免重复短语和犹豫语（I, I; uh）。回答要直接并提供具体细节，如什么时候拍、用什么设备以及拍什么类型的景色。注意语法（e.g. "when I see the sunrise" 而不是 "when I look the sunrise"）。

예시: Yes, I often take photos from the car, especially when I see a sunrise or dramatic clouds, because I want to capture those moments. I usually use my smartphone to quickly photograph the light and colors before they change.

제안: 问题是要在两者中选择并说明原因。避免同时说两个选项而不明确偏好。用一到两句清楚表达偏好并给出具体原因或例子，避免语法和词汇错误（e.g. "mountains look high" 不自然）。

예시: I prefer the mountains because I enjoy hiking and the peaceful atmosphere. For instance, I like climbing trails to see panoramic views and breathe fresh air, which feels more refreshing than being at the beach.

× Yes, I will look out I always look out the window at the scenery when traveling by bus or car. I will feel, uh, more freedom and when I look because it is uh, relaxed when I.

✓ Yes, I always look out the window at the scenery when traveling by bus or car. I feel more freedom and relaxation when I do.

问题类型：现在时使用错误（ID 6）。原句中混用了将来时“will”与一般现在时“always”，导致时态不一致。此处描述的是习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时。建议把“will look out”改为“always look out”；把“will feel”改为“feel”；最后一句用完整结构“when I do”或“when I look”来避免不完整句。

× Yeah, I, I can, I can take photos of the scenery outside, outside the car, uh, because I, I want to catch the beautiful, uh, scenery, for example, when I look the sunrise or the sun.

✓ Yes, I can take photos of the scenery outside the car because I want to capture the beautiful views, for example, when I see the sunrise.

问题类型：动词 + -ing 或动词形式使用错误（ID 8）。原句中“catch the beautiful scenery”与“when I look the sunrise”是不地道或不正确的搭配。应使用动词“capture”或“take”来表达拍摄，用“see the sunrise”或“watch the sunrise”。同时去掉多余的重复词“outside, outside”和口语填充词以更流畅。

× Yes, I really prefer the mountains and the sea. I think the mountains looks looks like a high. They will give us the big experience.

✓ Yes, I really prefer the mountains to the sea. I think mountains look very high. They give us a great experience.

问题类型：主谓一致与比较/用词错误（ID 27，部分涉及比较和形容词用法）。原句中“the mountains looks”主语“mountains”为复数，谓语应为“look”（复数形式）。“looks like a high”结构不正确，应改为“look very high”或“are very high”。“They will give us the big experience”时态与用词也不自然，描述常态应用一般现在时并改为“give us a great experience”或“a memorable experience”。