Travelling— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Покращте граматику та ясність: використовуйте правильні часові форми (наприклад, "watch" -> "watch" у теперішньому простому або "watched" -> "watching"), уникати зайвого повторення (наприклад, "it helps me" двічі). Почніть із простої теми речення, потім додайте 1–2 підтримуючі деталі з логічними зв'язками (наприклад, "so" або "and"). Контролюйте довжину — не більше 3–4 речень для природності.

예시: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel. In my hometown there is not much to see, so I usually relax and daydream while watching the passing scenery. Sometimes I notice places I would like to visit later, which helps me plan future trips.

제안: Виправте вживання слів і порядок слів: "memorize and relieve" некоректно — краще "remember" або "relive"; узгодьте артиклі та формулювання (наприклад, "in bad weather"; "there is nothing good to take a picture of" замість незавершеної фрази). Додайте плавні зв'язки (наприклад, "but" або "so") та скоротіть повтори.

예시: Yes, when I travel abroad I usually take photos of the scenery because I want to remember the trip and be able to relive those moments later. However, I rarely take photos in bad weather or at night because the views are not clear and the pictures turn out poorly.

제안: Зменшіть заповнювачі ("uh"), зробіть речення більш компактними і логічними, використайте зв'язки ("however", "because") та специфічні деталі. Уникайте повторів і зайвих фраз, дайте одну коротку причину або приклад.

예시: It depends on the season: I prefer the sea in summer and the mountains in autumn. If I had to choose one, I would pick the sea because I enjoy activities like snorkeling, swimming and sunbathing, and I love warm, sunny weather.

× Yes I do, but when I'm in my hometown there's usually nothing special to see at the road.

✓ Yes, I do, but when I'm in my hometown there's usually nothing special to see on the road.

The preposition 'at' is incorrect with 'the road'; the correct preposition is 'on'. Use 'on the road' to indicate location along the road. Suggestion: replace 'at the road' with 'on the road'.

× But it helps me to relax when I watched at the scenery when I'm traveling, and it also helps me to remember some spots that I want to visit in the future.

✓ But it helps me to relax when I watch the scenery while I'm traveling, and it also helps me remember some spots that I want to visit in the future.

Mixed tense and incorrect verb forms: 'watched' is past tense but context requires present simple 'watch' for habitual action. Also 'watched at' is incorrect; we say 'watch the scenery'. Use 'while' or 'when' with consistent present tense for habitual actions. Remove unnecessary 'to' before 'remember'. Suggestion: use present simple 'watch' and 'helps me remember'.

× Well, when I travel abroad, I usually take pictures of the scenery because I want to memorize and relieve the trip later.

✓ Well, when I travel abroad, I usually take pictures of the scenery because I want to remember and relive the trip later.

Incorrect word choice: 'memorize' is not used for remembering experiences; use 'remember'. 'Relieve' is wrong here; the correct verb is 'relive' (to experience again). Both verbs should be in base form after 'want to'. Suggestion: use 'remember' and 'relive'.

× However, when it's a bad weather or it's night, there is no really good.

✓ However, when the weather is bad or it's night, there's nothing really good to photograph.

Multiple issues: use 'the weather' not 'a bad weather' (uncountable noun requires 'the'). 'There is no really good' is incomplete; clarify what is lacking ('nothing really good to photograph'). Combine clauses and use natural phrasing. Suggestion: say 'when the weather is bad' and complete the sentence with the object.

× There is nothing special to take a picture of.

✓ There is nothing special to take a picture of.

Structure is acceptable, but more natural is 'There is nothing special to take pictures of.' If correcting to plural: objects of 'take pictures of' are usually plural when referring generally. Suggestion: consider 'There is nothing special to take pictures of.' for naturalness.

× In summer I prefer the sea and in autumn I prefer mountains.

✓ In summer I prefer the sea, and in autumn I prefer the mountains.

Use definite article 'the' with 'mountains' when speaking generally about the mountain environment. Consistent parallel structure with articles improves clarity. Suggestion: add 'the' before 'mountains'.

× But if I had to choose only one, I would prefer sea because there are so many activities like snorkeling, swimming and sunbathing uh to do.

✓ But if I had to choose only one, I would prefer the sea because there are so many activities like snorkeling, swimming and sunbathing to do.

Missing definite article 'the' before 'sea'. Also filler 'uh' should be omitted in written form. Modal conditional 'would prefer' is fine. Keep the infinitive 'to do' at end without interruption. Suggestion: add 'the' before 'sea' and remove fillers.

× I also love uh sun and hot weather is perfect for me.

✓ I also love the sun, and hot weather is perfect for me.

Missing article 'the' before 'sun'. Remove filler 'uh'. Add comma and conjunction for clear sentence structure. 'Hot weather is perfect for me' is correct. Suggestion: use 'the sun' and avoid fillers in speech transcriptions.