Travelling— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it has minor repetition and some unnatural phrasing. Make your response more concise, correct the repeated word, and add one specific detail to enrich the answer. Use a linking phrase if you expand the idea.

예시: Yes, I often look out the window to enjoy the natural scenery. For example, I like watching green hills and small villages pass by because it helps me relax during long journeys.

제안: The idea is good, but the answer has several grammatical errors and is slightly repetitive. Make sentences shorter and clearer, correct tense and article use, and add a specific example of what you photograph. Use a linking word such as 'so' or 'because' to explain your reason.

예시: Yes, I often take photos of scenes I find special because I want to remember them later. For instance, I photograph unusual sunsets or interesting buildings when I travel, so I can look back at those memories in the future.

제안: Your preference is clear, but there are grammar and word-choice problems (capitalization, articles, extra words). Be specific about which beach activities you enjoy and use linking words to connect ideas. Keep the answer to two or three concise sentences.

예시: I prefer the sea because I enjoy the warm sunshine and the cool water. For example, I like swimming and beach volleyball, and I find the seaside atmosphere very relaxing.

× Yes, I love to enjoy the atmosphere of of the nature and the beautiful scenery everywhere I pass.

✓ Yes, I love enjoying the atmosphere of nature and the beautiful scenery wherever I pass.

Problems: repeated word 'of of' and incorrect preposition 'of the nature' and awkward verb phrase 'love to enjoy'. Use 'enjoying' after 'love' for natural phrasing, drop extra 'of', use 'nature' without 'the', and use 'wherever' instead of 'everywhere' for places you pass. Suggestion: 'I love enjoying the atmosphere of nature and the beautiful scenery wherever I pass.' Grammar problem type ID:11

× I usually capture every moment that I feel priceless to have a thing.

✓ I usually capture every moment that I feel is priceless.

Problems: unnecessary phrase 'to have a thing' and missing linking verb 'is'. Use 'feel is priceless' to describe the moment. Suggestion: 'I usually capture every moment that I feel is priceless.' Grammar problem type ID:8

× When I experience something, I will take a photo of it and then I when I'm older I can look back to this moment.

✓ When I experience something, I take a photo of it so that when I'm older I can look back on that moment.

Problems: redundant words ('and then I when'), incorrect tense/modal mix: use simple present for habitual action 'I take' and 'can' for ability. Preposition 'look back to' should be 'look back on', and referent 'this moment' changed to 'that moment'. Suggestion: 'When I experience something, I take a photo of it so that when I'm older I can look back on that moment.' Grammar problem type ID:26

× I am a sea person, I love the atmosphere at the sea with the the light warm Suns and the cold water of the sea.

✓ I am a sea person; I love the atmosphere at the sea with the warm sunlight and the cold sea water.

Problems: wrong preposition 'at the sea' (use 'by the sea' or 'at the seaside'), article repetition 'the the', plural misuse 'Suns' and unnatural 'light warm Suns'. Use 'warm sunlight' or 'the warm sun' and 'sea water' or 'the cold water of the sea'. Suggestion: 'I am a sea person; I love the atmosphere by the sea with the warm sunlight and the cold sea water.' Grammar problem type ID:11

× I can play a lot of sport on by the beach.

✓ I can play a lot of sports on the beach.

Problems: incorrect combination 'on by the beach' and singular 'sport' used where plural 'sports' is natural. Use 'on the beach' as correct prepositional phrase. Suggestion: 'I can play a lot of sports on the beach.' Grammar problem type ID:11