Travelling— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Jawaban kurang jelas dan berbelit. Perbaiki struktur: mulai dengan kalimat topik yang langsung menjawab pertanyaan (Yes/No), lalu tambahkan 1–2 kalimat pendukung yang menjelaskan alasan secara spesifik. Gunakan kata penghubung sederhana jika perlu dan hindari kalimat yang tidak lengkap atau tata bahasa yang salah. Contoh fokus: kapan Anda tidur saat perjalanan, atau kondisi yang membuat Anda melihat pemandangan.

예시: No, I usually don't look out of the window when I travel by bus or car. I often fall asleep using a pillow and blanket on long journeys, so I miss most of the scenery. If the route is very scenic, I try to stay awake and enjoy it.

제안: Jawaban cukup bisa dipahami tetapi berantakan dan ada kesalahan kosakata dan tata bahasa. Mulailah dengan jawaban langsung, lalu beri alasan singkat dan contoh spesifik. Gunakan kata penghubung seperti 'because' atau 'so' dengan struktur yang benar, dan pilih kosakata tepat (choose, environment → scenery).

예시: Yes, but not very often because I prefer to choose the best moments to take photos. If the scenery looks attractive, such as mountains or sunsets, I will take a quick photo through the window.

제안: Jawaban tidak langsung dan kalimat tidak selesai. Jawab langsung dengan menyatakan preferensi (I prefer the sea / mountains), lalu jelaskan alasan dengan detail spesifik (mis. aktivitas yang Anda lakukan di pantai atau gunung). Hindari kalimat terpotong dan perbaiki tata bahasa (want to read, at the beach).

예시: I prefer the sea because I enjoy relaxing and reading at the beach. For example, I like spending afternoons at a beach club with a good book and listening to the waves.

× OK, well I probably know because I just on the road I sleep at the pillow and the blanket. I don't know what happened on the road.

✓ OK, well I'm not sure, because when I'm on the road I sleep with a pillow and a blanket. I don't notice what happens outside.

The sentence has multiple structure problems: missing auxiliary verb ('I'm not sure'), incorrect prepositions ('on the road' is fine but 'sleep at the pillow' should be 'sleep with a pillow'), and awkward phrasing ('I don't know what happened on the road' should match present habit so 'I don't notice what happens outside'). Suggestion: break into two clear clauses, use proper auxiliary verbs and prepositions, and match tense/aspect to habitual action. Problem type ID:26

× OK, well yes, but it's not often because I vary to my to choose when I want to photo. So if the environment is good I take a picture on the car.

✓ OK, well yes, but not often because I prefer to choose when I want to take photos. So if the view is good I take a picture from the car.

Errors include wrong verb choice and form ('vary to my to choose' is incorrect; use 'prefer to choose'), incorrect verb form 'photo' should be 'take photos', and wrong preposition 'on the car' should be 'from the car'. Also 'environment' is better as 'view' or 'scenery' here. Suggestion: use 'prefer to' + base verb, use 'take a photo' and correct prepositions for location. Problem type ID:14

× Yes, I sometimes prefer to the sea because I want to reading in the beach club and I also.

✓ Yes, I sometimes prefer the sea because I want to read at the beach club and relax.

Preposition 'prefer to the sea' is incorrect; say 'prefer the sea' or 'prefer to go to the sea'. 'Want to reading' mixes infinitive and -ing; use 'want to read'. Use 'at the beach club' for location and complete the sentence ('and relax'). Suggestion: use 'prefer' without 'to' when followed by a noun, use 'want to' + base verb, and finish thoughts with a clear verb.