Building— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer more directly and clearly with correct grammar and concise sentences. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details (e.g., approximate building heights or surroundings). Use linking words for coherence and avoid repetition.

예시: No, there are no tall buildings near my home. Most buildings here are only three or four storeys high, so the area feels low-rise and spacious.

제안: Organize your reply into a clear main sentence and one supporting detail. Correct verb forms and reduce repetition. Use a linking word (e.g., "often" or "sometimes") and give a specific situation or reason why you take photos.

예시: Yes, I sometimes take photos of buildings when I go running. For example, I often stop to photograph a nearby block during sunset because the light looks beautiful against the facades.

제안: Be decisive and state the building name clearly, then explain why you want to visit using one or two supporting details. Use correct sentence structure and linking words like "because" or "so".

예시: Yes, I would like to visit the Sky Tower because I want to see the city from the top. From there I could enjoy panoramic views and take some photographs.

제안: Give a clear direct answer, then provide specific reasons using correct grammar. Use linking words such as "because" and avoid contradictions. Explain one or two concrete concerns (e.g., fear of heights, emergency evacuation).

예시: No, I wouldn't want to live in a tall building because I am afraid of heights. Also, I worry about evacuating quickly during an earthquake, which makes me prefer a low-rise house.

× No, I my near my home doesn't doesn't have a tall building.

✓ No, near my home there aren't any tall buildings.

The original sentence has word order and omitted subject problems and repeated words. Use 'there are/aren't' for existence (There be issue, ID 3) and correct word order: 'near my home there aren't any tall buildings.' Also 'any' is appropriate with negatives instead of 'a'.

× The tall building.

✓ There is no tall building.

This fragment lacks a verb, so it is incomplete (Sentence without a verb, ID 23). Combine with a verb to express the idea of nonexistence: 'There is no tall building.' Alternatively use 'There aren't any tall buildings.'

× The tall building in my area is about 3-4 is not tall.

✓ The buildings in my area are about three or four stories; they are not tall.

Original mixes numbers and lacks subject-verb agreement and correct pluralization (Singular and plural issue, ID 1; Subject-verb agreement, ID 27). Use plural 'buildings' and plural verb 'are', and clarify 'three or four stories' for height.

× Yes, sometime I take the photo when when when I exercise running and I'm running and near the the the building that the I take a photo the building with the sunset.

✓ Yes, sometimes I take photos when I am running near a building, especially when there is a sunset.

Multiple issues: 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' (incorrect use of adverb, ID 13/20), repetitions and extra words create sentence structure errors (ID 26). Use plural 'photos' for habitual action (Singular and plural, ID 1) and simplify to a clear clause: 'when I am running near a building, especially at sunset.'

× I think I don't have, OK, I think I want you to go to the Sky Tower because I want to take a view from the top four of the building.

✓ I don't have a specific building I want to visit. I think I would like to go to the Sky Tower because I want to see the view from the top of the building.

Original misuses 'you' instead of 'I' (Incorrect use of pronouns, ID 12) and has awkward phrasing 'top four'. Correct to 'top of the building' and use 'would like' for preference. Also fix missing article 'a specific building' (Article errors, ID 22).

× No, I did. I don't want to living as whole building because I have I am scared, scared the the height and if the earthquake I can run. I think I can I cannot run.

✓ No, I don't. I don't want to live in a whole building because I am scared of heights, and if there is an earthquake I don't think I could run.

Multiple errors: 'I did' is wrong here (Past tense issue, ID 5); use present 'I don't'. 'Want to living' mixes forms; use 'want to live' (Verb + -ing form, ID 8). 'Scared the the height' needs 'scared of heights' (Incorrect use of prepositions, ID 11). 'If the earthquake I can run. I think I can I cannot run.' has tense and modality problems; use conditional 'if there is an earthquake' and modal 'could' or 'would not be able to' to express inability (Modal verb usage, ID 4). Also remove repetitions and correct word order (Sentence structure errors, ID 26).