Building— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words, and add one specific supporting detail. Also correct article and countable noun usage and use a linking word if adding a reason.

예시: No, there aren’t any tall buildings near my home because I live in the countryside. However, I enjoy the peaceful scenery and fresh air, which makes me very happy.

제안: Improve grammar and clarity: use plural nouns and correct verb forms, remove hesitations, and give one specific example. Use a linking word to connect reason and example.

예시: Yes, I often take photos of buildings when I find them attractive. For example, I photographed an old colonial house last month because of its ornate facade and colorful shutters.

제안: Be more natural and avoid repetition. Use correct article before landmarks, give one or two clear reasons with linking words, and avoid repeating phrases like 'I want'.

예시: I would like to visit the Eiffel Tower in Paris because it looks impressive and offers great views of the city. Also, since it’s famous worldwide, I’d enjoy taking photos and learning about its history.

제안: Good clear answer but expand slightly with a specific detail and use a linking word. Correct repetition of 'I want' by variety in phrasing and add one concrete benefit.

예시: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because I could take beautiful photos and enjoy panoramic views. For instance, I imagine having a balcony where I can photograph city sunsets every evening.

× No, because I am living a countryside so umm there are no tall building near my home.

✓ No, because I live in the countryside, so there are no tall buildings near my home.

Use simple present 'live' for habitual or general states instead of continuous 'am living' (Present tense issue). Use the preposition 'in' with 'countryside' (Incorrect use of prepositions). Use the plural 'buildings' to agree with 'no' when referring to more than one (Singular and plural issue). Also include the article 'the' with 'countryside' and add commas for clarity.

× But I feel so beautiful and happy.

✓ But I feel very happy.

'Beautiful' normally describes appearance; when describing emotions, use 'happy'. Also 'so' is informal; 'very' is more appropriate. This addresses misuse of adjectives/adverbs and word choice (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs) and improves clarity.

× Yes, I often take photo of buildings if the buildings is beautiful or. Beautiful or queue, I will take photo.

✓ Yes, I often take photos of buildings if the buildings are beautiful or interesting; I will take photos.

Use plural 'photos' and 'buildings' with correct verb agreement 'are' (Singular and plural issue and Subject-verb agreement errors). Remove unclear fragment 'queue' and replace with 'interesting' or another suitable adjective. Use plural form consistently and avoid sentence fragments (Sentence structure errors).

× Well, I would like to visit Eiffel Tower in Paris.

✓ Well, I would like to visit the Eiffel Tower in Paris.

Use the definite article 'the' with named monuments like 'Eiffel Tower' (Article errors / Incorrect use of the definite article).

× I want to see it because it looks impressive and it's so popular in social media and I want see it.

✓ I want to see it because it looks impressive, it's very popular on social media, and I want to see it.

Add the missing 'to' in 'want to see' (Sentence without a verb/verb form error). Use 'on social media' (Incorrect use of prepositions). Use 'very' instead of 'so' for formality. Also add commas and conjunction 'and' for clear sentence structure (Sentence structure errors).

× Yes, I want to live in a tall building because I want to take photos and enjoy the view from the top.

✓ Yes, I want to live in a tall building because I want to take photos and enjoy the view from the top.

This sentence is grammatically correct and fits the question's tense and meaning; no correction needed.