Building— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear, natural and contains supporting details. To improve, make your topic sentence more concise and use a linking phrase to contrast past and present more smoothly (e.g., “Compared to a few years ago,...”). Also vary vocabulary slightly (use words like ‘high-rises’ or ‘skyscrapers’) to show range.

예시: Yes — there are several tall high-rises near my home. Most are apartment complexes, and recently more have been constructed, so compared to a few years ago the neighborhood looks much more modern.

제안: Good direct response with clear reasons. To improve, combine sentences with linking words for fluency (e.g., “but,” “however,” “because”), and add a brief specific example of a building type or place to make it more concrete.

예시: Not very often, but if I see a building with a unique design or impressive architecture I will take a photo because I like capturing interesting details; for example, I photographed a glass-covered theatre last month when it was lit up at night.

제안: Strong, focused answer with clear reasons and imagination. To improve further, vary adjectives (avoid repeating ‘absolutely’) and add a brief linked detail about when or how you might visit to show planning and expand content slightly.

예시: Yes — I would love to visit the Burj Khalifa in Dubai because it’s iconic; I’d go up to the observation deck to see the cityscape, ideally at sunset, since the view from the top would be breathtaking.

제안: Clear and balanced answer with pros and cons. To improve, start with a stronger topic sentence and use a linking word to contrast positives and negatives (e.g., “however”); give one concrete example of an inconvenience to add specificity.

예시: Yes, I would — I like the idea of a great city view and modern facilities in a tall building; however, I wouldn’t choose an extremely high floor because it can be inconvenient for quick trips outside or during elevator outages.

× Yes, there are quite a few tall buildings near where I live.

✓ Yes, there are quite a few tall buildings near where I live.

This sentence is grammatically correct: plural noun with correct 'there are' construction and proper verb agreement; no change needed.

× Most of them are apartment complexes and more are being built as the area develops.

✓ Most of them are apartment complexes and more are being built as the area develops.

This sentence is grammatically correct: plural noun 'complexes' matches 'are', and progressive passive 'are being built' is appropriate; no change needed.

× So compared with a few years ago, the neighborhood looks much more modern now.

✓ So, compared with a few years ago, the neighborhood looks much more modern now.

The sentence is grammatically correct. A comma after 'So' is optional but can improve readability; this is punctuation, not one of the listed grammar problem types.

× Not very often, to be honest.

✓ Not very often, to be honest.

This answer fragment is acceptable in spoken English; it contains no grammatical errors from the provided list.

× However, if I come across a building with a unique design or impressive architecture, I might take a photo of it.

✓ However, if I come across a building with a unique design or impressive architecture, I might take a photo of it.

The conditional structure and modal 'might' are used correctly; tense and agreement are appropriate.

× I especially like buildings that look beautiful at night.

✓ I especially like buildings that look beautiful at night.

This sentence is grammatically correct: relative clause and verb form are appropriate.

× Yes, absolutely.

✓ Yes, absolutely.

Short affirmative response is fine; no grammatical issues from the list.

× I would really like to visit the Burj Khalifa in Dubai.

✓ I would really like to visit the Burj Khalifa in Dubai.

Modal 'would' + verb is correctly used to express desire; proper noun usage is correct.

× It's such an iconic building and I would like to see the city from the observation deck.

✓ It's such an iconic building, and I would like to see the city from the observation deck.

Sentence is grammatically correct. Adding a comma before 'and' can improve readability but is punctuation rather than a listed grammar error.

× I imagine the view from the top would be absolutely breathtaking.

✓ I imagine the view from the top would be absolutely breathtaking.

Correct use of 'imagine' with conditional sense; verb forms and modal usage are appropriate.

× Yes, I think I would.

✓ Yes, I think I would.

Correct use of modal 'would' in response; no listed grammar error.

× I like the idea of having a great view of the city and living in a modern apartment with good facilities.

✓ I like the idea of having a great view of the city and living in a modern apartment with good facilities.

Gerund phrases and parallel structure are used correctly; no issue per the grammar list.

× That said, I probably would not want to live on an extremely high floor because it might be inconvenient sometimes.

✓ That said, I probably would not want to live on an extremely high floor because it might be inconvenient sometimes.

Modal verbs and negation are used correctly; tense and structure are appropriate.