Building— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản và cấu trúc câu: trả lời nên bắt đầu trực tiếp với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sửa lỗi về mạo từ và chia động từ, dùng cụm từ mô tả chính xác (ví dụ: "a 20-storey building"), và giới hạn dài không quá 3–4 câu. Thêm một chi tiết cụ thể về tầm nhìn hoặc vị trí để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

예시: Yes. I live in a 20-storey apartment building near my home. From my floor I can see the river and several other high-rises in the distance, which makes the view quite impressive.

제안: Cải thiện tính rõ ràng và từ vựng mô tả cảm xúc: trả lời cần câu chủ đề trực tiếp (Yes/No/Sometimes), sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và chọn từ đúng (ví dụ: "sometimes", "mountains make me feel refreshed"). Tránh sử dụng từ không chuẩn như "irrefreshing"; thay vào đó nêu lý do ngắn gọn và một ví dụ cụ thể về lúc bạn chụp ảnh.

예시: Sometimes. I prefer taking photos of mountains because they make me feel refreshed, but I also photograph interesting buildings when I find unique architecture or patterns.

제안: Cải thiện mạch văn và cụm từ mô tả: trả lời cần rõ ràng, tránh tiếng lắp (uh, umm), sửa ngữ pháp (ví dụ: "I would like to visit Landmark 81"), và cung cấp lý do cụ thể (chiều cao, quan điểm, tiện ích, không gian lãng mạn) với liên từ phù hợp (because, so, and).

예시: I would like to visit Landmark 81 because it is the tallest building in my country and offers panoramic city views. Many people go there to take photos and enjoy the atmosphere, so I think it would feel exciting and even romantic at night.

제안: Làm rõ ý và hoàn chỉnh câu: bắt đầu với một câu chủ đề rõ ràng (Yes/No + reason), sửa ngữ pháp ("a small building" hoặc "a low-rise building"), giải thích cụ thể vì sao cảm thấy riêng tư hơn (ví dụ: ít hàng xóm, ít ồn) và tránh câu bỏ dở. Dùng liên từ để nối các ý.

예시: No, I prefer living in a low-rise or small building because it feels more private and quieter. For example, there are fewer neighbors and less elevator traffic, so I can relax more easily.

× I think this my home now I'm living in apartment so this have 20 floor. It is really highly and I can see far things.

✓ I think this is my home now. I'm living in an apartment that has 20 floors. It is really tall and I can see far away.

Several sentence structure and article problems: missing verb 'is' after 'this' and missing articles 'an' and 'the' before nouns. 'Apartment' needs an article and 'have' should be 'has' to agree with singular noun (subject-verb agreement). '20 floor' should be plural '20 floors'. 'Highly' is an adverb but the correct adjective is 'tall'. 'See far things' is unnatural; use 'see far away'. Suggestion: break into shorter sentences, ensure verbs are present, use correct articles and noun plurality, and use appropriate adjective forms.

× Sometime because I like take photo in the mountain more than a building because the mountain make me feel irrefreshing but building is also make me reduce.

✓ Sometimes, because I like to take photos in the mountains more than of buildings, since the mountains make me feel refreshed, while buildings make me feel low.

Issues: 'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes' (adverb form). Missing infinitive marker 'to' before 'take'. 'Photo' should be plural 'photos' when speaking generally. 'In the mountain' should be 'in the mountains' or 'on the mountain' depending on meaning. 'Make me feel irrefreshing' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'refreshed'. 'Also make me reduce' is ungrammatical; likely intended 'make me feel down' or 'low'. Suggestion: use correct adverb forms, include 'to' before verbs of intention, pluralize general nouns, and choose appropriate adjectives for feelings.

× I think I want to visit is Landmark 81, uh, because it's really tall and is umm, and which is more common in my country, So people take photo in there. It's really rich. I think that and really romantic.

✓ I think the place I want to visit is Landmark 81 because it's very tall and well known in my country, so many people take photos there. It looks impressive and very romantic.

Problems: word order and extra fillers ('uh', 'umm') disrupt clarity. 'I think I want to visit is Landmark 81' lacks correct clause structure; should be 'the place I want to visit is...'. 'Which is more common' is incorrect relative clause; use 'well known' or 'popular'. 'Take photo in there' should be 'take photos there' — remove preposition 'in'. 'It's really rich' is odd describing a building; use 'impressive' or 'grand'. Suggestion: remove filler words, use correct relative clause structure, proper pluralization, and select suitable adjectives.

× I prefer living in small building because small building make me feel private more than tall building.

✓ I prefer living in a small building because a small building makes me feel more private than a tall building.

Missing articles before singular countable nouns: 'a small building'. Subject-verb agreement: 'small building make' should be 'small building makes'. Word order for comparative: 'feel more private' is the correct placement. Suggestion: always use articles with singular countable nouns and ensure the verb matches the singular subject; place 'more' before adjectives in comparisons.

× Sometime living in a small building I can.

✓ Sometimes, living in a small building I can relax/feel secure.

Fragment: the sentence lacks a complete verb phrase; 'I can' is incomplete without an action. 'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes'. Provide the intended completion (e.g., 'relax' or 'feel secure'). Suggestion: finish sentence with a clear verb or clause to express what 'can' refers to and correct adverb form.