Building— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答要更自然並直接，避免語法錯誤與多餘字詞。可以把句子合併並修正冠詞錯誤，並適當加入細節使回答更具體。具體建議：1) 修正語法（a apartment → an apartment）；2) 用一個主句直接回答，再用1-2句補充細節；3) 控制在最多5句內。

예시: Yes, I live in an apartment, and from my window I can see many tall residential and office buildings nearby. They make the area feel quite urban, especially at night when the lights are on.

제안: 減少猶豫語（uh）與重複詞，並注意名詞單複數和用詞搭配。應先直接回答，再用一兩個具體原因和例子支持。使用連接詞使語句流暢。

예시: Not really. I find architectural photography less interesting, so I usually focus on natural scenes instead. For example, I often take photos of mountains and rivers because I enjoy capturing changing light and scenery.

제안: 修正冠詞與詞序（a old → an old），並把回答更集中：先直接說要去的地方，接著給出具體原因或期待看到的東西。避免重複，控制句數。

예시: I'd like to visit an old history museum because I've never been inside one. I'm especially interested in seeing historical artifacts and classical paintings to learn more about the local culture.

제안: 回答要更簡潔並修正連接詞錯誤與單複數（a windy day 或 windy days）。先給出肯定回答，然後具體說明優點與一個限制，使用連接詞如 however 或 but 正確連接句子。

예시: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because it offers great views of the city. However, I wouldn't choose the very top floor since it can be noisy on windy days.

× I live in a apartment so looking out from my window there are lots of high buildings all around.

✓ I live in an apartment, so looking out from my window there are lots of tall buildings all around.

句中使用不定冠词时，元音发音开头的名词前应使用“an”而非“a”。此外，“high buildings” 更常用“tall buildings”。建议：遇到以元音音素开头的单词（如 apartment）时用“an”，并注意常用搭配。

× Actually not, because I think buildings is just, uh, boring.

✓ Actually not, because I think buildings are just, uh, boring.

主语“buildings”是复数，谓语动词需使用复数形式“are”。建议：判断主语是单数还是复数，确保动词形式一致。

× Yes, I prefer to take photos of natural view view for, for example, uh, mountains and rivers.

✓ Yes, I prefer to take photos of natural views, for example, mountains and rivers.

短语“natural view view”重复且搭配不当，应使用复数“natural views”来表示不同的自然景观。建议：避免重复，名词复数用于泛指多种景象。

× I'd like to visit a old History Museum.

✓ I'd like to visit an old history museum.

“a old”在元音音素开头的单词前应使用“an”。此外，习惯上“history museum”不需要大写“H”。建议：注意冠词用法及专有名词大小写规范。

× I have never been inside one before.

✓ I have never been inside one before.

该句语法正确，无需改动。保留原句。

× Also I like looking at all the paintings and historical objects.

✓ Also, I like looking at all the paintings and historical objects.

句子语法正确，但在书写时在“Also”后加逗号更自然。此处为风格建议而非必要语法修改。建议：在句首使用过渡词时可加逗号改善流畅性。

× Yes, I want to live in a tall building because tall buildings can offer a great view and you can see the entire city from your window and but I would not choose the top floor because it might be noisy on windy day.

✓ Yes, I want to live in a tall building because tall buildings can offer a great view and you can see the entire city from your window, but I would not choose the top floor because it might be noisy on windy days.

原句中“and but”存在连词重复，应去掉多余的连词并在从句之间用逗号分隔。此外“windy day”应使用复数“windy days”或加冠词“a windy day”。建议：避免使用冲突连词，注意可数名词的单复数一致性。