Building— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Clarify vocabulary and give a brief, direct answer with one specific detail. Use correct word choice (e.g., "tall buildings" or "high-rise apartments") and keep it to 1–2 sentences. For coherence, include a linking phrase if adding a detail.

예시: Yes, there are several tall buildings near my home. For example, there is a 20-storey apartment block and some office towers around the main road.

제안: Give a concise, clear answer and avoid repetition and incorrect words. State when and why you take photos, and include one specific example. Use linking words to organize the idea (e.g., "because" or "for example").

예시: Yes, I often take photos of buildings because I enjoy architectural details. For example, when I travel I photograph historic churches and old mosques to capture their decorations.

제안: Provide a direct topic sentence naming a specific building you want to visit, then give one clear reason. Avoid unrelated or unclear phrases. Use a linking word to connect reason (e.g., "because").

예시: Yes, I would like to visit the Taj Mahal because I want to see its beautiful marblework and famous gardens.

제안: Answer directly with a clear yes/no and give one or two concrete reasons to support your view. Use linking words (e.g., "because" or "however") and avoid vague phrases like "a property."

예시: I would consider living in a tall building because it offers great views and often has good security. However, I might prefer a house if I wanted more outdoor space.

× Yes, there are a lot of topicals near my home.

✓ Yes, there are a lot of tall buildings near my home.

The student used the incorrect noun 'topicals' which is not appropriate here. The intended meaning is 'tall buildings.' This is a vocabulary error coupled with a singular/plural check: 'a lot of' requires a plural noun. Suggestion: use the correct plural noun 'tall buildings.'

× Yes I I like to take photos of beauty especially when I travel alcohol buildings like Quran the Quran church I will take photos of it.

✓ Yes, I like to take photos of beautiful buildings, especially when I travel. For example, if I visit a famous mosque or church, I will take photos of it.

The original sentence has multiple problems: repeated 'I I' (typo), wrong word choices ('beauty' should be an adjective or noun phrase; 'alcohol' and 'Quran' are incorrect here), and poor sentence structure. Corrected by using 'beautiful buildings' (adjective + plural noun) and breaking into clearer clauses. Also clarified examples with correct nouns 'mosque' or 'church.' Suggestions: avoid repetition, use adjectives before nouns, choose appropriate nouns, and split into shorter sentences for clarity.

× Yes, they are blowing flower up to them.

✓ Yes, they are putting flowers on them.

The phrase 'blowing flower up to them' is ungrammatical and unclear. Likely intended meaning is placing or decorating buildings with flowers. Corrected to 'putting flowers on them.' Suggestion: use correct phrasal verbs ('put on') and ensure verb-object-preposition order is logical.

× If I want to live in a property.

✓ If I wanted to live in a property, I would choose a tall building.

The original is a sentence fragment (no main clause), so it's missing completion. Also the conditional needs matching forms: a hypothetical condition uses 'If I wanted..., I would...'. Suggestion: complete conditional sentences with both clauses and match verb tenses for real or hypothetical situations.