Building— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, ngắn gọn và đúng ngữ pháp. Hãy bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp, sau đó thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: loại tòa nhà, vị trí, mục đích sử dụng). Tránh lỗi danh từ số ít/số nhiều và cách dùng giới từ. Ví dụ: sửa các lỗi như "a retail buildings" → "a retail building"; "a official" → "an official".

예시: Yes, there are some tall buildings near my home. For example, there is a large retail building about two blocks away that serves as an official office for a company.

제안: Cần trả lời mạch lạc với câu chủ đề rõ ràng và dùng liên từ để nối ý. Tránh các cụm từ không rõ nghĩa như "Her beautiful sceneries" và dùng thì phù hợp. Nên đưa ví dụ cụ thể về khi nào và tại sao bạn chụp ảnh (ví dụ: ánh sáng, kiến trúc).

예시: Yes, I often take photos of buildings when I find their design interesting. For instance, I photograph facades with unusual shapes or beautiful lighting because they look striking in pictures.

제안: Câu trả lời nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề nêu tòa nhà cụ thể bạn muốn đến và lý do rõ ràng, tránh thông tin mơ hồ như "easy" hoặc các tên không rõ. Thêm chi tiết cụ thể (vị trí, đặc điểm kiến trúc, lịch sử) và dùng liên từ để liên kết ý.

예시: I would like to visit the L80 Tower in Vietnam in the future because of its striking modern architecture and panoramic views. I’ve heard it has an observation deck and a rooftop garden, which would be great for photography.

제안: Cần trả lời trực tiếp và dùng từ ngữ chính xác; tránh các cụm từ dịch sát từ tiếng Việt như "town building" hay "her high level". Nên đưa lý do cụ thể (ví dụ: sợ độ cao, tiếng ồn, tiện ích) và kết thúc bằng một câu tóm tắt. Chú ý ngữ pháp: dùng "afraid of heights" thay vì "scared of her high level".

예시: Off the top of my head, I wouldn’t like to live in a tall building because I’m afraid of heights and I worry about elevators during emergencies. I prefer a low-rise house with a garden.

× Yes, near my home is a retail buildings which is a official building for a employer.

✓ Yes, near my home is a retail building which is an official building for an employer.

The noun 'buildings' should be singular 'building' to match the singular verb 'is' (singular/plural agreement). 'a official' is incorrect because 'official' begins with a vowel sound, so use 'an official'. 'a employer' should be 'an employer' because 'employer' begins with a vowel sound. Suggestion: ensure nouns agree with verbs and choose 'a' or 'an' based on initial sound of the following word.

× I will say yes whenever I see. Her beautiful sceneries.

✓ I will say yes whenever I see her beautiful scenery.

The fragment 'whenever I see.' lacks an object; combine with the next fragment. 'Sceneries' is incorrect in this context — 'scenery' is an uncountable noun, so use the singular form. Also 'Her' should be lowercase 'her' and attached to the clause. Suggestion: combine clauses properly and use uncountable nouns correctly.

× I will take photos of this building because it's very great.

✓ I will take photos of this building because it is very impressive.

'Very great' is awkward and not a natural collocation in English. Use an appropriate adjective like 'impressive' or 'beautiful'. Suggestion: prefer natural adjective choices and avoid literal translations like 'very great'.

× I would like to visit L80 one in the future because it's very beautiful and easy.

✓ I would like to visit L80 in the future because it is very beautiful and accessible.

'L80 one' is unclear and redundant; remove 'one'. 'Easy' is vague; here 'accessible' or 'easy to reach' fits better. Suggestion: remove redundant words and choose precise vocabulary.

× A Tony building in Vietnam.

✓ It is the Tony Building in Vietnam.

This fragment lacks a verb and is not a complete sentence. Add a subject and verb to make it complete. 'Tony Building' should be capitalized as a proper noun. Suggestion: form full sentences with subject and verb.

× Off the top of my head, I think that I don't really like to live in a town building because I extremely scared of her high level.

✓ Off the top of my head, I don't really want to live in a tall building because I am extremely scared of its height.

Several pronoun and structure errors: 'town building' is incorrect — use 'tall building'. 'I extremely scared' lacks the verb 'am' and adverb order; correct is 'I am extremely scared'. 'her high level' incorrectly uses 'her' for a building; use 'its' and 'height' instead of 'high level'. Suggestion: use correct pronouns for objects ('it/its'), include the correct form of 'to be', and use appropriate nouns ('height').