Building— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence answering "no" then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid filler words (umm, uh) and unclear phrases. Use simple, correct structures and correct vocabulary (e.g., "storey", "houses"). Keep to 2–4 sentences.

예시: No, there are no tall buildings near my home. I live in a small rural town where most houses are two- or three-storey family homes. The area is low-density and mostly residential, so you won’t find high-rises here.

제안: Answer directly, then give a clear reason and one concise example. Replace informal verbs like "click" with "take photos of" and remove hesitations. Use linking words (for example, when, because) to connect ideas and be specific about what you photograph.

예시: Not usually, but I do take photos of buildings when I travel. For example, I like photographing ancient temples and historical buildings because of their architectural details and cultural significance.

제안: Give a clear, well-structured reply: state the building, explain why you want to visit with specific reasons, and mention a brief plan or feeling. Avoid repetition and fillers; use linking words like "because" and "so". Be precise about what attracts you (architecture, history, interiors).

예시: Yes, I would like to visit Lakshmi Vilas Palace in the future because I’m fascinated by its architecture and historical interiors. I didn’t learn much about it when I first saw it, so I plan to take a guided tour, study the design details, and take photographs to remember the visit.

제안: Provide a direct yes/no answer followed by two specific reasons. Use correct comparative and descriptive language (e.g., "apartments in tall buildings are usually smaller"). Avoid filler words and finish the sentence. Use linking words like "because" and "so" to connect ideas.

예시: No, I wouldn’t like to live in a tall building. I prefer my current large house because apartments in high-rises are usually smaller and offer less outdoor space, and I value having a garden and more privacy.

× I live in the rural developing town, so no.

✓ I live in a rural developing town, so no.

The sentence is missing the indefinite article before a singular countable noun ('rural developing town'). Use 'a' before 'rural' to make the noun phrase grammatical. Also keep 'so no' as a short answer but adding the article fixes sentence structure.

× I need umm tall buildings near my home.

✓ I do not have tall buildings near my home.

The original uses 'need' incorrectly to express absence. Use 'do not have' or 'there are no' to indicate that tall buildings are not present. This fixes the verb choice and clarifies meaning.

× Uh all. All are uh societies so where all homes are two BHK or three BHK or two storage house or three Storey B house.

✓ All the houses are in housing societies and are usually two-BHK or three-BHK, or two-story or three-story buildings.

The original is fragmented and uses inconsistent terms. 'All the houses' clarifies subject; 'housing societies' is the correct noun phrase; use hyphenated forms 'two-BHK' and 'three-BHK' or 'two-story' and 'three-story' to describe houses. This corrects sentence structure and word choice.

× Not redder than uh.

✓ They are not taller than that.

The original fragment 'Not redder than' is incorrect and unclear. Likely intended comparison with 'taller', so use 'They are not taller than that.' This corrects the adjective choice and completes the sentence.

× Uh, I don't click the all type of buildings photos, but uh, whenever I go on a trip, so I uh, saw on ancient temples or else ancient buildings, uh, uh, are nearby.

✓ I don't take photos of all types of buildings, but whenever I go on a trip and see ancient temples or other old buildings nearby, I take photos of them.

Use 'take photos' rather than 'click photos' for natural English. 'All type' should be 'all types'. 'Saw on ancient temples' is wrong tense and preposition; use 'see' with present simple for habitual action and 'other old buildings' for clarity. Also ensure object pronoun 'them' refers back to buildings.

× So I click it on uh, my view.

✓ So I take photos of them from my viewpoint.

The phrase 'click it on my view' misuses preposition and verb. Use 'take photos of them' and 'from my viewpoint' or 'from my perspective' to express where the photos are taken.

× Yes, of course, I like to visit Lakshmi Villas Palace in the future because I, that time I visited, I not, uh, any uh, information about that, but uh, in the future, I, uh, definitely visit it and click it all, uh, all the inferior designs and uh, also for memories.

✓ Yes, of course. I would like to visit Lakshmi Villas Palace in the future because when I visited it before I did not have any information about it, but in the future I will definitely visit it again, take photos of its intricate designs, and keep them as memories.

Use 'would like to' or 'will' for future intentions. Fix past tense: 'when I visited before I did not have information'. Use 'again' to indicate a repeat visit. 'Click it all the inferior designs' is incorrect — use 'take photos of its intricate designs'. Also 'for memories' becomes 'keep them as memories.' This corrects tense, verb choice and sentence structure.

× Uh, I think, uh, I'm not, uh, living in the tall building because, uh, I live, uh, in, uh, house, uh, it is very big.

✓ I don't think I would like to live in a tall building because I already live in a very big house.

Original mixes present progressive incorrectly. Use 'I don't think I would like to live' to express preference. 'I live in house it is very big' needs 'a very big house' and clearer structure. This corrects tense and article usage.

× So uh, and a tall building house are very small and not very area, uh, not very, very well developed area.

✓ Houses in tall buildings are usually small and the surrounding areas are often not very spacious or well developed.

Correct the noun phrase and agreement: 'a tall building house are' is ungrammatical. Use 'Houses in tall buildings are usually small' and 'surrounding areas are often not very spacious or well developed' to express the idea clearly. This fixes subject-verb agreement and adjective choice.

× So I like to.

✓ So I prefer not to live in a tall building.

The original is an incomplete sentence. Complete it with a clear statement of preference to match the preceding explanation.