Building— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Говоря кратко и связно, вам нужно: 1) Начинать с простой основной фразы, прямо отвечающей на вопрос; 2) Использовать связки (for example, however, because) для пояснений; 3) Избегать заполнителей (uh) и грамматических ошибок (артикли, согласование числа); 4) Давать более точные детали (числа, названия районов). Попрактикуйтесь в простых предложениях, затем добавляйте одно-два поясняющих предложения.

예시: There are not many tall buildings near my home; most are only five to seven storeys. If you want skyscrapers, you have to go to the suburbs because the city centre is full of historical buildings.

제안: Старайтесь давать более плавный ответ: 1) Начинайте с краткого прямого ответа; 2) Используйте связку для причин (because, so) и контраст (but); 3) Уточняйте примеры (какие пейзажи, какая архитектура). Избегайте лишних слов и говорите по теме.

예시: Not really. I usually prefer photographing landscapes because I find natural scenes more beautiful. However, if a building has interesting architecture or unique details, I will take photos of it.

제안: Улучшите точность и структуру: 1) Дайте прямой ответ, затем опишите здание чётко; 2) Используйте связки для уточнения (for example, it is called..., it looks like...); 3) Избегайте неточных выражений (belting cube) — лучше дать сравнение или описание формы; 4) При необходимости назовите город или страну.

예시: Yes, I would like to visit a group of cube houses in Norway. I can't remember the exact name in Norwegian, but the houses are tilted cubes mounted on pillars and their unusual geometry is very different from buildings I usually see.

제안: Сосредоточьтесь на ясности и корректной лексике: 1) Начните с чёткого мнения (No, I wouldn't); 2) Замените неверные слова (strikes → storeys/floors); 3) Объясните причины с двумя короткими предложениями, используя связки (because, and); 4) Избегайте повторов и лишних слов.

예시: No, I wouldn't want to live in a tall skyscraper. I prefer a house or a low-rise building of two or three storeys because it feels more comfortable and less intimidating.

× They're on to many plan many tall buildings near my home it's usually only 5 or 7 floors.

✓ There aren't too many tall buildings near my home; they're usually only 5 or 7 storeys.

The student used incorrect prepositions and words: 'on to' should be 'not', 'plan' is incorrect here, and word order is wrong. Use 'There aren't' to state existence (There be issue/negative) and 'too many' to express quantity. Also add punctuation to separate clauses. Suggestions: Use 'There is/There are' for existence, 'too many' for excess, and 'usually' before the description. Replace 'floors' with 'storeys' or keep 'floors'.

× Such buildings aren't considered all in my countries.

✓ Such buildings aren't common in my country.

Plural and pronoun errors: 'all' is incorrect here and 'countries' should be singular if referring to the speaker's nation. Use 'common' to express frequency. Suggestions: Use singular 'country' for one nation and 'common' instead of 'considered all'.

× Uh and to find really tall ones you need to go to suburbs of my city because the Santa is full of historical buildings.

✓ To find really tall ones you need to go to the suburbs of my city because the centre is full of historical buildings.

Preposition and word choice errors: 'to suburbs' needs the definite article 'the suburbs'. 'the Santa' is likely a mispronunciation; replace with 'centre' or 'downtown'. Suggestions: Use 'the suburbs' and 'the centre' for common nouns describing parts of a city.

× Not really often.

✓ Not very often.

Adverb choice and placement: 'Not really often' is unidiomatic. Use 'not very often' to negate frequency. Suggestions: Use 'not very often' or 'rarely'.

× I mostly prefer taking photos of landscapes because I find them much more beautiful than urban scapes.

✓ I usually prefer taking photos of landscapes because I find them much more beautiful than urban scenes.

Word choice: 'mostly prefer' is awkward; 'usually prefer' is better. 'urban scapes' is nonstandard; use 'urban scenes' or 'cityscapes'. Suggestions: Use 'usually' for habitual preference and standardized nouns like 'cityscapes'.

× But sometimes the architecture is very nice so I can take some photos of it.

✓ But sometimes the architecture is very nice, so I take some photos of it.

Modal/ability vs habitual action: 'can take' implies ability rather than habit. Because the student talks about a habitual action, use simple present 'I take'. Suggestions: Use simple present for habitual actions.

× Actually, yes, there is a building I would like to visit.

✓ Actually, yes, there is a building I would like to visit.

This sentence is correct; 'There is' correctly introduces existence. No change needed. Suggestions: None.

× I don't really remember the name of it because it is Norwegian language,

✓ I don't really remember its name because it is in Norwegian,

Preposition and possessive: Use 'its name' instead of 'the name of it' for fluency, and 'in Norwegian' instead of 'Norwegian language'. Suggestions: Use 'its' and 'in + language' construction.

× but it's like a cube belting cube house and the construction is really unusual for what I am used to see.

✓ but it's like a cube-shaped house and the construction is really unusual compared to what I am used to seeing.

Word form and verb form errors: 'belting cube house' is incorrect; 'cube-shaped' describes the form. Use 'compared to' for comparison and 'used to seeing' (verb + -ing) after 'used to'. Suggestions: Use adjectives like 'cube-shaped' and the correct 'used to seeing' structure.

× Not at all, I would like to live in a building with 2-3 strikes or maybe even if in my own home,

✓ Not at all. I would like to live in a building with 2–3 storeys or maybe even in my own house,

Preposition and word choice errors: 'strikes' is incorrect for storeys/floors; use 'storeys' or 'floors'. 'maybe even if in my own home' is ungrammatical; use 'maybe even in my own house'. Suggestions: Use 'storeys'/'floors' and 'in my own house' for clarity.

× because I find it much more convenient and cozy than living in a in an apartment in gigantic skyscraper.

✓ because I find it much more convenient and cozy than living in an apartment in a gigantic skyscraper.

Article and word order errors: Remove the extra 'a in an' and add 'a' before 'gigantic skyscraper'. Use consistent articles. Suggestions: Check for duplicated articles and include the correct article before singular countable nouns.

× For me it can be even scarier to live in such place.

✓ For me, it can even be scarier to live in such a place.

Missing article and word order: Add comma after introductory phrase, 'even' placement before 'be' is acceptable but 'even be scarier' should be 'can even be scarier', and add 'a' before 'place'. Suggestions: Insert articles for singular countable nouns and punctuate introductory phrases.