Building— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be clear and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence answering the question, then add one or two specific supporting details. Correct grammar (negation, articles, plurals) and use linking words for coherence.

예시: No, there aren’t any tall buildings near my home. I live in a small village where most houses are single-storey and the shops are low-rise. For example, the tallest building nearby is a two-storey grocery, so the skyline is mostly flat.

제안: Answer directly, then give a specific condition when you do take photos. Fix tense and article errors, and shorten redundancy. Use a linking phrase to introduce the exception.

예시: Not usually. However, when I notice an attractive or unusual building, I often take a photo to remember its details. For instance, I photographed an old town hall last month because of its ornate facade.

제안: Give a direct answer naming the building or type, then explain specific reasons with linking words. Avoid vague phrases and redundant words; correct grammar and word choice.

예시: Yes. I would love to visit the city cathedral because I admire its Gothic architecture and stained-glass windows. Also, I want to go up to the tower to enjoy the panoramic view of the city.

제안: Answer directly and then explain reasons with specific details. Correct grammar (singular/plural, verb forms) and choose precise vocabulary. Use linking words to connect ideas.

예시: No, I wouldn’t like to live in a tall building. I prefer small houses because they feel cozier and quieter; for example, a small garden and lower noise levels help me relax and recharge.

× Honestly not there no enlargement near my home as I lived in a small village so there are small homes and some shops which are not much taller and people on their livings from the small shops.

✓ Honestly, there are no large buildings near my home because I live in a small village, so there are small houses and some shops that are not very tall, and people make a living from the small shops.

Multiple issues: double negation and incorrect word choice ('not there no enlargement') and tense mismatch ('lived' should be present), plural/word form errors ('homes' vs 'houses' acceptable but 'enlargement' is wrong), incorrect phrase 'people on their livings' should be 'people make a living'. Suggestion: use clear subject-verb structure, keep present tense to match the situation, replace incorrect nouns with 'large buildings' and use 'make a living' for the idiom.

× No, not really. I did not take any photos of building, but whenever I see adorable architecture of the building, I usually take photos to keep a memory to preserve them.

✓ No, not really. I have not taken any photos of buildings, but whenever I see an attractive building, I usually take photos to keep a memory of it.

Errors: article and count noun use ('photos of building' needs plural or article), tense choice (use present perfect 'have not taken' for experience up to now), word choice ('adorable architecture of the building' is awkward) and pronoun agreement ('them' referring to a singular building). Suggestion: use plural 'buildings' or 'a building', use present perfect for past actions with relevance now, and match pronouns to the noun.

× Yes, definitely both qualifies one of the building that I want to really visit because I love the adorable architecture of that building and I want to enjoy the panoramic view from the top of the building.

✓ Yes, definitely. That is one of the buildings I really want to visit because I love its attractive architecture and I want to enjoy the panoramic view from the top.

Problems: unclear phrase 'both qualifies one of the building', subject-verb agreement ('qualifies'), article and plural errors ('one of the building' should be 'one of the buildings'), redundant wording. Suggestion: simplify to a clear subject ('That is one of the buildings'), correct agreement, use possessive 'its' for the building's architecture, and remove repetition.

× No, I don't want to live in a tall building, I love small building or small houses as I think they offers me a sentimental and quite pleased to live where I can enjoy and refreshes my mind.

✓ No, I don't want to live in a tall building. I prefer small buildings or small houses because I think they give me a sentimental, quiet place to live where I can relax and refresh my mind.

Multiple issues: run-on sentence, singular/plural and article errors ('small building' should be plural or 'a small building'), subject-verb agreement ('they offers' should be 'they give' or 'they offer'), word choice ('quite pleased' incorrect) and verb form ('refreshes my mind' should be 'refresh my mind'). Suggestion: split into two sentences, use plural consistently, correct verb agreement, and choose verbs that fit collocations ('relax and refresh my mind').