Building— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: You should answer directly and use correct grammar and vocabulary. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g. "No, there aren't any tall buildings near my home."), correct mistakes ("I live in a small apartment/house"), and avoid redundancy. Add one brief supporting detail using a linking word (e.g. "because the area is mainly residential"). Keep it under 3 sentences.

예시: No, there aren't any tall buildings near my home. I live in a small house in a quiet, residential neighborhood, so most buildings are only two or three storeys high.

제안: Make a grammatically correct topic sentence and give specific reasons with linking words. Use correct verb forms ("I like taking photos") and clearer vocabulary ("some buildings are interesting because of their unique designs and modern facilities"). Limit to 2–3 sentences and avoid unclear comparisons.

예시: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of buildings. I particularly like modern or historic structures because their unique designs and interesting details make good subjects for photography.

제안: Answer directly and use fluent, natural phrasing. Say the building name clearly and give 1–2 specific reasons using linking words (e.g. "because" or "as"). Avoid repetition and fix grammar ("I'd like to visit the Burj Khalifa because..."). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, I'd like to visit the Burj Khalifa because it's the tallest building in the world and I want to see the panoramic view from the observation deck.

제안: Give a clear, single-sentence opinion followed by one concise reason. Correct grammar ("Yes, I would like to live in a tall building") and use precise vocabulary ("suits my lifestyle" → "suits my lifestyle because..."). Use a linking word such as "because" and avoid fillers and repetition.

예시: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because it offers great city views and modern amenities, which suit my busy urban lifestyle.

× I live a small blazer.

✓ I live in a small flat.

The original sentence lacks the preposition 'in' required after 'live' to indicate location and uses 'blazer' (a jacket) instead of 'flat' (apartment). This is a sentence structure and vocabulary error. Use 'live in' + place. Replace 'blazer' with the correct noun 'flat' or 'apartment'.

× There is not any tall building near my home.

✓ There are no tall buildings near my home.

'There' + be must agree in number with the noun. 'Building' should be plural ('buildings') and negative forms are commonly 'there are no...'. Use 'are' for plural subjects and 'no' or 'any' with appropriate word order: 'There are not any tall buildings' or preferably 'There are no tall buildings'.

× Yes, I like take photos of buildings.

✓ Yes, I like taking photos of buildings.

After the verb 'like', use the gerund (verb + -ing) when describing general preferences. Replace 'take' with 'taking' to form the correct structure 'like doing something'.

× Something building is very interesting, they are unique design and they are better facilities than I take photos.

✓ Some buildings are very interesting; they have unique designs and better facilities, so I like to take photos of them.

Multiple issues: 'Something building' is incorrect — use 'Some buildings' for plural. Pronoun agreement: 'they' must match plural noun. 'Unique design' should be plural 'unique designs' when referring to different buildings. 'They are better facilities than I take photos' is ungrammatical; clarify meaning: likely 'they have better facilities, so I like to take photos of them.' Reconstruct sentence to correct structure and clarity.

× I want like to visit tall building is Burj Khalifa.

✓ The tall building I would like to visit is the Burj Khalifa.

Word order and unnecessary verb are incorrect. Use a relative clause 'The tall building I would like to visit is...' or 'I would like to visit the Burj Khalifa.' Also include the definite article 'the' before a famous building name optionally: 'the Burj Khalifa'.

× It's my dream.

✓ It is my dream.

Contraction 'It's' is acceptable, but expand to 'It is' for clarity. This sentence itself is grammatically fine; correction is stylistic. (If compressing to only errors from list, no change required.)

× I'm I want to visit. This building.

✓ I want to visit this building.

This fragment contains extra subject 'I'm' and a sentence fragment 'This building.' Combine into a single correct sentence: 'I want to visit this building.' Remove the redundant 'I'm'.

× Yes, I want to live in the tall building because it's it's I I prefer to live a tall building because it's a suits my lifestyle.

✓ Yes, I want to live in a tall building because it suits my lifestyle.

Many errors: repeated words ('it's it's I I') and incorrect article usage ('a tall building' vs 'the tall building'). Use 'a tall building' for a general desire. 'Suits my lifestyle' is correct structure: subject + verb + object. Remove duplications and extra modal phrasing. The modal 'want to' is fine; restructure to concise correct sentence.'