Building— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời thiếu sự rõ ràng, ngữ pháp và mạch lạc. Học sinh nên trả lời trực tiếp với một câu chủ đề, dùng thì và số danh từ đúng (singular/plural), tránh dư thừa, và cung cấp một hoặc hai chi tiết hỗ trợ liên kết bằng từ nối (because, so, for example). Nên chia câu dài thành câu ngắn để rõ ý và dùng từ vựng chính xác (e.g., “many tall buildings”, “popular tourist destination”, “hang out with friends on weekends”).

예시: Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home. My city is a popular tourist destination, so high-rise hotels and offices have been built recently. For example, I often see several skyscrapers along the main riverfront when I walk to the market.

제안: Câu trả lời lặp từ và thiếu cấu trúc đầy đủ. Nên mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng (Yes/No + reason), tránh lặp lại cùng một tính từ, sử dụng linking words (when, because) và mô tả cụ thể hơn (what times, what features). Sử dụng thì hiện tại đơn cho thói quen và số nhiều/đếm được đúng (photos, buildings, friends).

예시: Yes, I often take photos of buildings. When I hang out with friends on weekends, I usually photograph interesting facades or unique architecture because I like capturing details such as decorations and colors.

제안: Câu trả lời không hiểu được và chứa nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ sai nghĩa và thứ tự từ lộn xộn. Học sinh cần trả lời trực tiếp (Yes/No + which building), đưa lý do rõ ràng và ví dụ cụ thể. Tránh dùng từ không liên quan; học từ vựng về các loại tòa nhà (museum, cathedral, skyscraper, historic building).

예시: Yes, I would like to visit the old city museum downtown because it has historic architecture and interesting exhibits. I have heard the interior decorations are beautiful, so I want to see them and take photos.

제안: Câu trả lời có ý chính nhưng cần diễn đạt rõ ràng hơn: mở đầu bằng một câu chủ đề trực tiếp, giải thích lý do bằng các chi tiết cụ thể (convenience, noise, community atmosphere) và dùng liên từ (because, although). Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (a tall building, small buildings, family atmosphere). Giữ độ dài 2–3 câu.

예시: No, I wouldn't like to live in a tall building. I prefer small buildings because they are quieter and more convenient, and they often have a stronger family atmosphere, which I value.

× Yes, in my city that I live in, there are many tall building near my home because my city is a popular travel destination so it's very sustainable and beautiful place so I can play hang out with my friend at weekend.

✓ Yes, in the city where I live, there are many tall buildings near my home because my city is a popular travel destination, so it's a very sustainable and beautiful place and I can hang out with my friends at the weekend.

The main issues are pluralization and article usage. 'building' should be plural 'buildings' to match 'many'. 'the city where I live' is more natural than 'in my city that I live in'. 'friend' should be plural 'friends' because 'hang out with' implies more than one person or at least is more natural with plural after 'my'. 'at weekend' is incorrect in English; use 'at the weekend' (British) or 'on weekends' (American). Also punctuation and sentence flow were improved. Suggestions: make nouns agree in number, use relative clause 'the city where I live', use correct article with 'weekend', and split ideas with commas to improve clarity.

× Exactly. My favorite routine is take photo of building.

✓ Exactly. My favorite routine is taking photos of buildings.

When using 'is' followed by a verb to describe a routine, use the gerund form 'taking'. 'photo' should be plural 'photos' when speaking generally, and 'building' should be plural 'buildings'. Suggestions: after 'is' use gerund for activities and ensure noun number matches general meaning.

× I often take photo of building when I hang out with my friend and I see a beautiful building.

✓ I often take photos of buildings when I hang out with my friends and see a beautiful building.

Use plural 'photos' and 'buildings' for general statements. 'my friend' should be plural 'my friends' for consistency with 'hang out' (unless referring to one friend). Also remove the redundant 'I' before 'see' to make the sentence smoother. Suggestions: make plurals consistent and avoid unnecessary repeated subjects.

× I love this. It's very beautiful and beautiful.

✓ I love it. It's very beautiful.

Repeating the adjective 'beautiful' is redundant. Use 'it' instead of 'this' when referring back to an idea already mentioned. Suggestions: avoid repetition and use concise expressions.

× Nothing I don't want videos any tall building because I love beef full and plastic suck at a small building on all the hotels then store building.

✓ No, I don't want to visit any tall buildings because I prefer small buildings near hotels and stores.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Nothing' and 'I don't want videos' are incorrect. 'visit' fits the question asking about visiting. 'beef full and plastic suck' seems to be incorrect words; I inferred the intended meaning was a preference for small buildings near hotels and stores. The corrected sentence uses proper negation 'No, I don't want to visit' and plural agreement 'buildings'. Suggestions: use clear verbs that match the question (visit), use correct negation 'No, I don't...', and replace unclear phrases with intended meaning. If the student's intended meaning differs, they should state it clearly.

× I don't want to live in the top building.

✓ I don't want to live in a tall building.

'Top building' is unnatural; 'tall building' matches the topic. The sentence is otherwise grammatically correct but 'a tall building' is more natural than 'the top building'. Suggestions: choose the noun phrase that correctly reflects the idea; use 'a' for a general preference.

× I love small building because it's very beautiful and convenient.

✓ I love small buildings because they're very beautiful and convenient.

Use plural 'buildings' to match the general preference. Change 'it's' to 'they're' to agree with plural subject 'buildings'. Suggestions: ensure subject and verb agree in number.

× However, I I love atmosphere of families.

✓ However, I love the atmosphere of family life.

Double 'I' is a typo. 'Atmosphere of families' is awkward; use 'the atmosphere of family life' or 'a family atmosphere'. Include the definite article 'the' for a specific concept. Suggestions: remove duplicate words, use natural collocations like 'family atmosphere' or 'family life', and include articles where needed.