Building— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答直接但有口语填充词和重复（like, so）较多，应更简洁自然。可先给出主题句，然后补充一两条具体细节（例如哪些类型的高楼，离家多远）。注意句子数量不超过5句，避免重复表达。

예시: Yes. I live close to the city centre, so there is a central business district with many tall office towers. Most of them are within a ten-minute walk from my flat, and they include modern glass skyscrapers and a few older brick high-rises.

제안: 回答表达热情但有犹豫语（uh）和非正式词汇（like）影响流利度。应更具体说明拍摄原因、风格或常用构图，使用连接词使信息连贯。

예시: Yes, I enjoy photographing buildings, especially modern skyscrapers near my home. I like capturing their reflections and geometric patterns, and I often shoot at sunset to get warm light and stronger contrasts.

제안: 回答内容明确但有语法错误和重复（visit to, I'm very looking forward to visit）。应改正语法并加入具体原因或计划（比如观景台、设计特色或预计时间），避免冗长的填充词。

예시: Yes, I would like to visit the Burj Khalifa in Dubai because it's the tallest building in the world and its design fascinates me. I hope to go there to see the observation deck and photograph the city from above when I travel to Dubai next year.

제안: 表达了观点但语法和用词混乱（don't love to, I live in a tall building），并有过多填充词。建议先明确回答（Yes/No），然后用两到三句具体原因并用连接词组织（for example, moreover）。可给出替代偏好（比如低层或独栋房）。

예시: No, I wouldn't prefer living in a very tall building. It can be inconvenient because you rely on elevators, which may be crowded or require transfers, and being so high can raise safety and evacuation concerns. I would rather live on a low-rise apartment or a house with easier access.

× Yes, my home is near the city centre, so there's like a CBD near my home, so there's many tall buildings there.

✓ Yes, my home is near the city centre, so there's a CBD near my home, so there are many tall buildings there.

此句有两处“there be”结构使用错误。第一处“there's like a CBD”应使用單數表達，改為“there's a CBD”或“There is a CBD”。第二處“there's many tall buildings”主語為複數（many tall buildings），應使用複數形式“there are”。建議注意主語單複數一致：當後面接可數複數名詞時用“there are”，接可數單數或不可數名詞時用“there is”。

× Yes, I really love to take photos of buildings, especially like some, uh, modern skyscrapers, which was just near my home.

✓ Yes, I really love to take photos of buildings, especially some modern skyscrapers, which are just near my home.

關係代詞引導的從句描述的是現在存在的摩天大樓，應使用一般現在時的動詞“are”。原句用“was”是過去式/單數誤用，與先行詞複數“skyscrapers”及現在狀態不符。建議用一般現在時與複數動詞一致：“which are”或簡化為“which are near my home”或“which are just nearby”。

× Uh, yes, I really want to visit to the Harifa Tower in Dubai because I've never been there and I've heard that it's the tallest building in the world.

✓ Uh, yes, I really want to visit the Harifa Tower in Dubai because I've never been there and I've heard that it's the tallest building in the world.

此句的主要問題是“visit to”用法不正確。動詞“visit”後通常直接接地點或人而不加介詞“to”——應為“visit the Harifa Tower”而非“visit to the Harifa Tower”。其他部分時態和結構正確。建議記住動詞搭配：visit + 直接受詞，不用 to。

× So hopefully I look, I'm very looking forward to visit this tower in the future.

✓ So hopefully, I'm really looking forward to visiting this tower in the future.

本句包含兩個問題：一是“I'm very looking forward to visit”中“looking forward to”結構後應接動名詞（-ing）形式，因此“to visit”應改為“to visiting”。二是短語“I look, I'm very looking forward”冗餘且語序不自然，應刪除“I look”或改為自然連接。建議使用固定搭配“look forward to + -ing”，例如“I'm really looking forward to visiting...”或“Hopefully, I'll be able to visit...” 。

× For me, I don't love to, I live in a tall building because actually, uh, top, I think top building was not that very convenient.

✓ For me, I don't want to live in a tall building because, actually, I think living at the top of a building is not very convenient.

原句中有代詞和結構混亂："I don't love to, I live in a tall building"語意矛盾且使用不當；“top”單獨出現不明確；“top building was not that very convenient”時態與表達不自然。改正時把句子重組為清晰主語+謂語結構，並用“不想住”（don't want to live）表達意願，用“living at the top of a building is not very convenient”表明位置和狀態。建議在表達意願時使用“don't want to”，並用完整子句說明原因。

× You need to like, uh, use the elevator to go to your floor. And sometimes you also need to change the elevator and there's also like some safety problems when you're high.

✓ You need to use the elevator to get to your floor, and sometimes you also need to change elevators, and there can be some safety problems when you're high up.

原句中多處口語填充詞（like, uh）和連詞使用不夠精確。建議將“use the elevator to go to your floor”改為更自然的“use the elevator to get to your floor”；“change the elevator”應為“change elevators”（複數或不加定冠詞）表示換乘；“there's also like some safety problems when you're high”語法與語序不自然，改為“there can be some safety problems when you're high up”更通順且語法正確。建議減少口語填充詞，使用恰當連接詞連接並注意可數名詞複數形式及副詞位置。